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Array ( [sid] => 108027 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Jephthah's Daughter, Book of Judges 9,10,11 [time] => 2005-10-18 19:50:36 [hometext] => This is the darkest narrative of the entire Bible. Exegetes are still debating about it. [bodytext] =>


A Hebrew Raider fierce,- a Gileadite-
Named Jephthah, from his clan and tribe exiled,
Was summoned from exile to lead the fight
Against the Ammonites, - he had an only child.

His daughter was his joy and all his pride,
And great the love between the child and dad,
Her loveliness a comfort to man’s sight
And to the warrior dad from Gilead.

He’d make the Moabites’ ramparts fall,
And deal the Ammonites a deadly blow,
Assault and smash the city’s ancient wall,
And batter haughty pagan Moab’s brow.

Elected chieftain Jephthah had to lead
The battle armies ‘gainst the cruel foe;
He prayed to God for victory in need
And swore and made to God a solemn vow.

He made this oath before the soldiery
All strong arrayed and the assembled crowd,
Exhorting all to pray for victory,
To put the vicious Ammonites to rout.

He spoke: “Oh Lord I’ll sacrifice to Thee,
The first that I shall meet by my abode,
The first that on return encounters me,
I’ll offer as burnt sacrifice Lord God!”

Wild Jephthah thought his dog would surely bound,
Be first to welcome him upon return,
There was no ill to sacrifice the hound
Who was now dim, and could no longer learn.

Rash reckless warrior from Gilead,
With unenlightened vows and promises
That does not know who he’ll be looking at
When he the victim of his rashness sees.

But horror, that all narrative defies
No canine did his homestead’s portals burst.
But his beloved child - the sacrifice,
Who did precede all others as the first.

She did precede the joyous lengthy train
Of hearty welcome shouters drawing near,
She ran and leaped along the homestead’s lane,
And then across the field to father dear.




Her father had returned victorious!
She ran to his encounter with swift feet,
Her victor father strong and glorious,
She thrilled, to be the first with him to meet.

In festive garments with bright glowing face
With golden hair in amber radiance,
Her heart throbbed loud awaiting his embrace,
Her tambourine accompanied her dance.



Woe unto you poor father Gileadite,
Your child appeared the first before your eyes,
Abysmal horror and soul’s darkest night
His only child the promised sacrifice.

She shouted loud with joy, her tambourine
Rang rhythmically to her mirthful dance,
Eyes luminous, the features of a queen,
Revealing boundless joy's exuberance.

“Ah welcome home again, my father dear,
I waited for you anxiously so long!”
She capered, frolicked, and the servants’ cheer
Accompanied the maiden’s joyous song.

Oh wretchedness, Oh desperation wild,-
His only offspring loved with tenderness,
And now to sacrifice this only child!-
Woe rash and unconsidered promises!

Sinister images rose from a mound,
His consciousness beclouded, the poor dad,
Stood paralized, by sacred promise bound,
By vow to God to do the deed of dread!

The maiden learned the truth and then professed
Both valor and obedience unheard of,
She listened to the father and caressed
His hand in meek and tender filial love.

The sweet obedient maiden heroine
Said softly: “father dearest do not weep“,
And dropping to the ground the tambourine
Spoke” What you promised father you must keep.”!



Allow me though two months for a retreat
For prayer with my friends upon the hill,
When I come back, then father do the deed,
That shall your vow before the Lord fulfill.

In Hebrew lore this maiden exemplar,
That all the maidens mourn and much bewail,
Shines as her people’s brightest shining star
The pride of all the tribes of Israel.

No more speaks scripture after that of her,
Nor of the father, Jephthah’s wretched lot,
Oh grief and pain untellable to bear,-
His solemn promise to Almighty God.



But scripture exegetes did assert
That hapless Jephthah got sound counseling
To put back in his sheath the killing sword
And not the dreadful sacrifice to bring.

T’is said that during prayer’s interlude
The elders learned that the Yahweh much abhorred
All human sacrifice, and dared transmute
the dreadful vow as hateful to the Lord.

And exegetes claim that Jephthah got
Advice from Israel’s sages to abstain
From human sacrifice that pleases not
The Lord, but the brave maiden to ordain
As tabernacle virgin serving God.

The maiden served the Lord by day and night
But Israel’s maiden would but weep and wail,
No off-spring for poor Jephthah,- so they cried,
And to posterity passed on this tale.


© Elizabeth Dandy

Yes,- Vows were biding and final' under usual circumstances. However
there also were circumstances that nullified them. (One that only in
'principal' applies to this case is the fact that a woman's vow to
God
could be nullified by a husband or father with no consequences. Numbers
30:6-16)

However even for men, a vow to YHWH was set aside under certain
serious
circumstances. According to the Mosaic law a sworn vow could be
forgiven
just on the basis that he was without knowledge somehow. Leviticus
5:4-10: 'Or if any one swear rashly with his lips to do evil, or to
do
good, whatsoever it be that a man shall utter rashly with an
oath...and
it be hid from him; when he knoweth of it, then he has become guilty
as
respects one of these things.5...he shall confess that wherein he
hath
sinned. 6 And he shall bring his trespass-offering to Jehovah for his
sin that he has sinned...and the priest shall make atonement for him
as
concerning his sin. 10...and he shall be forgiven.'--ASV








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Jephthah's Daughter, Book of Judges 9,10,11

Contributed by Elizabeth_Dandy on Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 07:50:36 PM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry





A Hebrew Raider fierce,- a Gileadite-
Named Jephthah, from his clan and tribe exiled,
Was summoned from exile to lead the fight
Against the Ammonites, - he had an only child.

His daughter was his joy and all his pride,
And great the love between the child and dad,
Her loveliness a comfort to man’s sight
And to the warrior dad from Gilead.

He’d make the Moabites’ ramparts fall,
And deal the Ammonites a deadly blow,
Assault and smash the city’s ancient wall,
And batter haughty pagan Moab’s brow.

Elected chieftain Jephthah had to lead
The battle armies ‘gainst the cruel foe;
He prayed to God for victory in need
And swore and made to God a solemn vow.

He made this oath before the soldiery
All strong arrayed and the assembled crowd,
Exhorting all to pray for victory,
To put the vicious Ammonites to rout.

He spoke: “Oh Lord I’ll sacrifice to Thee,
The first that I shall meet by my abode,
The first that on return encounters me,
I’ll offer as burnt sacrifice Lord God!”

Wild Jephthah thought his dog would surely bound,
Be first to welcome him upon return,
There was no ill to sacrifice the hound
Who was now dim, and could no longer learn.

Rash reckless warrior from Gilead,
With unenlightened vows and promises
That does not know who he’ll be looking at
When he the victim of his rashness sees.

But horror, that all narrative defies
No canine did his homestead’s portals burst.
But his beloved child - the sacrifice,
Who did precede all others as the first.

She did precede the joyous lengthy train
Of hearty welcome shouters drawing near,
She ran and leaped along the homestead’s lane,
And then across the field to father dear.




Her father had returned victorious!
She ran to his encounter with swift feet,
Her victor father strong and glorious,
She thrilled, to be the first with him to meet.

In festive garments with bright glowing face
With golden hair in amber radiance,
Her heart throbbed loud awaiting his embrace,
Her tambourine accompanied her dance.



Woe unto you poor father Gileadite,
Your child appeared the first before your eyes,
Abysmal horror and soul’s darkest night
His only child the promised sacrifice.

She shouted loud with joy, her tambourine
Rang rhythmically to her mirthful dance,
Eyes luminous, the features of a queen,
Revealing boundless joy's exuberance.

“Ah welcome home again, my father dear,
I waited for you anxiously so long!”
She capered, frolicked, and the servants’ cheer
Accompanied the maiden’s joyous song.

Oh wretchedness, Oh desperation wild,-
His only offspring loved with tenderness,
And now to sacrifice this only child!-
Woe rash and unconsidered promises!

Sinister images rose from a mound,
His consciousness beclouded, the poor dad,
Stood paralized, by sacred promise bound,
By vow to God to do the deed of dread!

The maiden learned the truth and then professed
Both valor and obedience unheard of,
She listened to the father and caressed
His hand in meek and tender filial love.

The sweet obedient maiden heroine
Said softly: “father dearest do not weep“,
And dropping to the ground the tambourine
Spoke” What you promised father you must keep.”!



Allow me though two months for a retreat
For prayer with my friends upon the hill,
When I come back, then father do the deed,
That shall your vow before the Lord fulfill.

In Hebrew lore this maiden exemplar,
That all the maidens mourn and much bewail,
Shines as her people’s brightest shining star
The pride of all the tribes of Israel.

No more speaks scripture after that of her,
Nor of the father, Jephthah’s wretched lot,
Oh grief and pain untellable to bear,-
His solemn promise to Almighty God.



But scripture exegetes did assert
That hapless Jephthah got sound counseling
To put back in his sheath the killing sword
And not the dreadful sacrifice to bring.

T’is said that during prayer’s interlude
The elders learned that the Yahweh much abhorred
All human sacrifice, and dared transmute
the dreadful vow as hateful to the Lord.

And exegetes claim that Jephthah got
Advice from Israel’s sages to abstain
From human sacrifice that pleases not
The Lord, but the brave maiden to ordain
As tabernacle virgin serving God.

The maiden served the Lord by day and night
But Israel’s maiden would but weep and wail,
No off-spring for poor Jephthah,- so they cried,
And to posterity passed on this tale.


© Elizabeth Dandy

Yes,- Vows were biding and final' under usual circumstances. However
there also were circumstances that nullified them. (One that only in
'principal' applies to this case is the fact that a woman's vow to
God
could be nullified by a husband or father with no consequences. Numbers
30:6-16)

However even for men, a vow to YHWH was set aside under certain
serious
circumstances. According to the Mosaic law a sworn vow could be
forgiven
just on the basis that he was without knowledge somehow. Leviticus
5:4-10: 'Or if any one swear rashly with his lips to do evil, or to
do
good, whatsoever it be that a man shall utter rashly with an
oath...and
it be hid from him; when he knoweth of it, then he has become guilty
as
respects one of these things.5...he shall confess that wherein he
hath
sinned. 6 And he shall bring his trespass-offering to Jehovah for his
sin that he has sinned...and the priest shall make atonement for him
as
concerning his sin. 10...and he shall be forgiven.'--ASV








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Re: Jephthah's Daughter, Book of Judges 9,10,11 (User Rating: 1 )
by lostrelic on Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 08:22:55 PM AEST
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that is amazing long write very indept wow
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Re: Jephthah's Daughter, Book of Judges 9,10,11 (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Wednesday, 19th October 2005 @ 12:11:35 AM AEST
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Elizabeth this is amazing. I'm speechless.
You've outdone yourself with this one.
I'm honestly lost for words. A remarkably written poem in such full detail.
May God bless ur dear heart Elizabeth and may he always shine a guiding light for u are such a spirtual soul.
May God always shower his blessings over u always.
Much love,
Sue


Re: Jephthah's Daughter, Book of Judges 9,10,11 (User Rating: 1 )
by remote on Wednesday, 19th October 2005 @ 04:17:41 AM AEST
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All your hard work does shine through this work.


Re: Jephthah's Daughter, Book of Judges 9,10,11 (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 19th October 2005 @ 04:47:15 AM AEST
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Very good write my friend.
My thinking on the whole matter is that Gopd recognized the fact that he was willing to keep his vow even tho his daughter was all he left.
Very good my friend.
huggs, luv,
emy


Re: Jephthah's Daughter, Book of Judges 9,10,11 (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Wednesday, 19th October 2005 @ 01:58:27 PM AEST
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Marvelously written with much depth and content dear ED. One of my favorite stories in the entire Bible. I remember learning that under the law at that time dogs were not allowed in the abode of anyone that professed to worship the True God, so Jephtha had no idea that his only daughter would come from his house to meet him, and we can all imagine his joy as well as his disappointment (knowing he lost her to the temple) for a whole lifetime
I learned so much from this story ED,. First, that you should never vow unless you are will to make the sacrifice, and then after much thought, how very fortunate she was to be able to spend her whole time in the service of her Lord, even sacrificing children, and husband, family, such as you are doing now ED. How commendable!
Enjoyed this poem tremendously!
Warm love
consue


Re: Jephthah's Daughter, Book of Judges 9,10,11 (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Wednesday, 19th October 2005 @ 11:08:16 PM AEST
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Ah yes... what a powerful and terrible story that is. And you have done well portraying it. Bravo!

What you say is true. A vow to the Lord was the most binding promise one could ever make. Yet, when His hatred of human sacrifice is brought into the picture, we can hope that he obtained a release from fulfilling his rash oath.

Andrew
(liking this)


Re: Jephthah's Daughter, Book of Judges 9,10,11 (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamPoetess on Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 12:05:33 AM AEST
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I sought, this is lovely. I think you have a great short story here. Wonderful text. It is full of information, and I should wish you to write more, you can only recite what you know, great write, it is lovely, thank you, and thank you for reading, commenting on my poem too. :>

Meagan


Re: Jephthah's Daughter, Book of Judges 9,10,11 (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 11:56:45 PM AEST
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My Goodness Gracious Dear Lady, you wrote a quite a story here, informative, thank you, enjoyed it very much so. Nice research. Thank you for the pictures.

Raquel Leah :D


Re: Jephthah's Daughter, Book of Judges 9,10,11 (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 24th October 2005 @ 09:16:20 AM AEST
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only one word for it,,,Brilliant,,loved reading it ,,,hugs Eddy




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