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Array ( [sid] => 108022 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Blade [time] => 2005-10-18 18:45:50 [hometext] => [bodytext] => She Starves herself to rid herself of him
She says shes perfictly happy
Just being his friend
But she holds her breath with each embrace
Knowing she lied right to his face

She holds the knife to her small chest
Feeling her heart pound behind her small breasts
As the cold metal gazes her soft skin
Life seeping out from deep within
She screams out his name
But this time it doesn't sound the same

As the vision of his face is replaced
By the cold empty clasp
Of the blade that stole her breath [comments] => 3 [counter] => 175 [topic] => 22 [informant] => xDizzyGirlx [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

The Blade

Contributed by xDizzyGirlx on Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 06:45:50 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

She Starves herself to rid herself of him
She says shes perfictly happy
Just being his friend
But she holds her breath with each embrace
Knowing she lied right to his face

She holds the knife to her small chest
Feeling her heart pound behind her small breasts
As the cold metal gazes her soft skin
Life seeping out from deep within
She screams out his name
But this time it doesn't sound the same

As the vision of his face is replaced
By the cold empty clasp
Of the blade that stole her breath

Copyright © xDizzyGirlx ... [ 2005-10-18 18:45:50]
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Re: The Blade (User Rating: 1 )
by Cupid on Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 07:56:00 PM AEST
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WOW! POWERFUL poem you've got here xDizzyGirlx!

I love the language, though your spelling needs a little work, I think. Unless it was a typo, which is more easily forgiven... ; )

Keep up the FAB work!

Re: The Blade (User Rating: 1 )
by jheng on Wednesday, 19th October 2005 @ 09:50:18 AM AEST
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i do like your poem, it may be morbid, but i do like it

Re: The Blade (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 02:55:47 PM AEST
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Certainly a very thought provoking write.I liked the impact of the last verse particularly.
Keep on writing

Steve

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