Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	29-May 17:15:54 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 107962 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Letter To Moomy [time] => 2005-10-17 22:23:11 [hometext] => I wrote this poem when I was watching a movie about a girl who was dying of cancer and this was the first thing that popped into my head. So i just started writting.. [bodytext] => Mommy,
Promise me you wont cry,
when I tell you tonight,
is my last night.

Mommy,
Hold back the tears,
when I stand here and say good night,
for my last time.

Mommy,
Tell me you love me too,
and I want you to know,
that no one can replace you.

Mommy,
Please don't forget me,
and how you raised me to be,
the little girl that you can now see.

Mommy,
Always remember the times,
That we laughed and giggled,
not the ones when we cried.

Mommy,
I promise you that,
when I get to heaven,
I will put in some good words about you.

Mommy,
The last thing I want you to think,
Is that just because I'm only eight,
I cant see the love that you gave.

Mommy,
I know the truth,
That I was sent here,
to be an angel to you.

But Mommy,
The truth remains,
That angels are with you,
every single day.

So Mommy,
When you cry those little tears,
always remember,
i will be somewhere near.

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 163 [topic] => 52 [informant] => NpSwEeThEaRt09 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )

Letter To Moomy

Contributed by NpSwEeThEaRt09 on Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 10:23:11 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

Mommy,
Promise me you wont cry,
when I tell you tonight,
is my last night.

Mommy,
Hold back the tears,
when I stand here and say good night,
for my last time.

Mommy,
Tell me you love me too,
and I want you to know,
that no one can replace you.

Mommy,
Please don't forget me,
and how you raised me to be,
the little girl that you can now see.

Mommy,
Always remember the times,
That we laughed and giggled,
not the ones when we cried.

Mommy,
I promise you that,
when I get to heaven,
I will put in some good words about you.

Mommy,
The last thing I want you to think,
Is that just because I'm only eight,
I cant see the love that you gave.

Mommy,
I know the truth,
That I was sent here,
to be an angel to you.

But Mommy,
The truth remains,
That angels are with you,
every single day.

So Mommy,
When you cry those little tears,
always remember,
i will be somewhere near.

Copyright © NpSwEeThEaRt09 ... [ 2005-10-17 22:23:11]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: Letter To Moomy (User Rating: 1 )
by coolbreeze17 on Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 12:32:16 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

really touching...great write

Re: Letter To Moomy (User Rating: 1 )
by Whisper on Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 04:25:32 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

I enjoyed that. Good Write. Too bad about the opps in the title :-)

Whisper

Re: Letter To Moomy (User Rating: 1 )
by kaysea on Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 11:24:14 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

love this piece--thanks for the good cry

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com