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...One...





...Together...







SultryRose's Signatures





U could lite up the room
as I feel ya now,
with your sunny smile.
Together we felt luv
Now u lite me from above.

My hippy-n-me,
my children three.
My hippy-n-me
watched um grow
Teaching them by example
My ole hippy-n-me.

Many times we'd jus laugh
smilen from here to there.
Luved touched our lives
total unity, no cares.

You took us by our hearts
Smiled as we all grew.
Like Hiawatha, total peace.
Now keeps angel eyes on us
In God's light, totally true.

Never realized till u passed
but knew it's you that's true.
Only luv shines in heart
Beemin from heaven's shore.
Oh my hippy, luv u 4 eva more.
[comments] => 9 [counter] => 227 [topic] => 34 [informant] => emystar [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )
MY HIPPY-N-ME

Contributed by emystar on Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 07:38:34 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics








...One...





...Together...







SultryRose's Signatures





U could lite up the room
as I feel ya now,
with your sunny smile.
Together we felt luv
Now u lite me from above.

My hippy-n-me,
my children three.
My hippy-n-me
watched um grow
Teaching them by example
My ole hippy-n-me.

Many times we'd jus laugh
smilen from here to there.
Luved touched our lives
total unity, no cares.

You took us by our hearts
Smiled as we all grew.
Like Hiawatha, total peace.
Now keeps angel eyes on us
In God's light, totally true.

Never realized till u passed
but knew it's you that's true.
Only luv shines in heart
Beemin from heaven's shore.
Oh my hippy, luv u 4 eva more.




Copyright © emystar ... [ 2005-10-17 19:38:34]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: MY HIPPY-N-ME (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 07:56:18 PM AEST
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nice poem...i love the story it tells.

wiz


Re: MY HIPPY-N-ME (User Rating: 1 )
by remote on Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 02:30:44 AM AEST
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Well the picture is of gypsies that's one thing wrong here, another, many might have told you before, sms english just doesn't work in a poetry no matter what you think, its just too distracting and makes the writer look too lazy to type.


Re: MY HIPPY-N-ME (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 03:07:49 AM AEST
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Aww Emy this was so beautiful and honest. I think poems with honesty on them are always the best one.

Hugs,
Jane~


Re: MY HIPPY-N-ME (User Rating: 1 )
by thumper on Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 07:55:42 AM AEST
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This was so sweet. Great write. Sorry for your loss. And aren't those Native Americans in the pic? Or am I just seeing things? (It's possible! lol) Peace to ya, Emy.
Thumps ;o)


Re: MY HIPPY-N-ME (User Rating: 1 )
by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 10:43:34 AM AEST
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Outstanding write...
Nicely done.

Jeff


Re: MY HIPPY-N-ME (User Rating: 1 )
by Elizabeth_Dandy on Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 11:25:08 AM AEST
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Oh Emystar, - your soul shines again through these so sweet and delightful write.
Faith, hope and love these three, but the best is always love. And you got it.

Be blessed!

The great st. Thomas Acquinas' tjeses and insights were based on "The Simpl;city of God"
Some poets believe a work must be intriguijgly complicated and sophisticated to touch the readers.
But the simple truth - what the heart feels -courageously displayed is all that matters.
You got it Emystar.

Love and peace
Elizabeth


Re: MY HIPPY-N-ME (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 01:19:31 PM AEST
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Very nice lyrics and poetry emy such a sweet write u always come up with.


(((((emy))))))

Ben


Re: MY HIPPY-N-ME (User Rating: 1 )
by Willofree on Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 01:09:57 PM AEST
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Very whimsical and kind of care free verse or lyrics. Theme of peace and love, and God's love and protection. A very pleasant and fun write. Very beautiful graphics.

Super write, emy. My only problem, and maybe it's just my old eyes, I have a real hard time reading the comments printed in the pastel colors, ie, yellow, blue and pink.
They are very pretty, however. :) If it's just me please don't change anything. I just didn't want to miss anything. I hope i'm not being abrasive here.....

Will


Re: MY HIPPY-N-ME (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 22nd October 2005 @ 06:51:09 AM AEST
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wonderful absulutely wonderful ,,you get a very well done from me ,,,hugs Eddy




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