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Of one starry moonbeam
One night, one lovely kind
Revealed a love upon my mind

Now, I dream internally
To keep this love eternally
I hold my heart under the sun
Spinning tears until I am done

Trying to keep from breaking apart
I hold my pen close to this genuine heart
Painfully, my words impart
As I can still hear this ending voice part

Perhaps, it feels mine from its direction
Locating my pain, as I tell of a lost connection
Every word, every line I write, I now cling to
A starry moonbeam, fading moon of blue

The shining sun is tearfully lined
With aching thoughts upon my mind
Memories of that one true birth
Imagined dream, this someone on earth :>

Meagan

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One Starry Moonbeam

Contributed by DreamPoetess on Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 06:23:56 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

...I sit here to dream
Of one starry moonbeam
One night, one lovely kind
Revealed a love upon my mind

Now, I dream internally
To keep this love eternally
I hold my heart under the sun
Spinning tears until I am done

Trying to keep from breaking apart
I hold my pen close to this genuine heart
Painfully, my words impart
As I can still hear this ending voice part

Perhaps, it feels mine from its direction
Locating my pain, as I tell of a lost connection
Every word, every line I write, I now cling to
A starry moonbeam, fading moon of blue

The shining sun is tearfully lined
With aching thoughts upon my mind
Memories of that one true birth
Imagined dream, this someone on earth :>

Meagan

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Re: One Starry Moonbeam (User Rating: 1 )
by hoist1atca on Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 06:59:33 PM AEST
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Very sad but very good write-
I enjoyed it a great deal-
The sun has a way of shining through to reach even the darkest of corners of a heart and soul-
Take care-
Joe

Re: One Starry Moonbeam (User Rating: 1 )
by Mild_Tempest on Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 08:03:12 PM AEST
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"Trying to keep from breaking apart
I hold my pen close to this genuine heart
Painfully, my words impart
As I can still hear this ending voice part"

My favorite stanza. Great write, keep it up.

Re: One Starry Moonbeam (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 09:35:40 PM AEST
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Meagan so sad, yet so beautiful. A very well expressed piece of poetry that brings tears to ones eyes. A heartfelt write, written so well.
Keep up the great work Meagan and may ur heart see brighter days.
*hugs*
Sue

Re: One Starry Moonbeam (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 03:25:14 AM AEST
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Well, this flow sweeps along wonderfully! The rhyme scheme worked well, and you expressed your emotions well too.
Something about that second stanza really stands out for me. Good write; keep it up!!

Scorp.
(Who really liked the title)

Re: One Starry Moonbeam (User Rating: 1 )
by Elizabeth_Dandy on Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 09:50:18 AM AEST
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So very sad and so very beautiful Megan;.
The poem encompasses and engages all the faculties, and emotion that stir in the soul.

Longing, regret, loss, and hope and trust that nothing is every lost.
Astounding write.
Keep them coming.
Love and peace
Elizabeth

Re: One Starry Moonbeam (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 19th October 2005 @ 12:50:06 AM AEST
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such sadness yet so beautifuly expressed so
many directions on the highway of your emotions and i feel there velocity as they pass by ever so ambiguiously, this touches the heart.

Ben

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