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Array ( [sid] => 107933 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Willing to take a chance [time] => 2005-10-17 16:47:45 [hometext] => Been pondering if I should? [bodytext] => The dunes, the grains of sand
that fall through these hands.
Mirthful laughter awaiting,
waiting on someone worth stating.

In anger in tears,
left behind a crater of an apolyptic world,
forward facing all my fears,
waiting for oppurtunity to reappear.

Now searching, thoroughly testing these walls,
to make sure we are not doomed again to fall.
To take a red rose, rivetting the realisation,
romance is choice awaiting a situation.

No more will I be a bystander,
waiting on time no longer,
knowing now that I`ve become stronger,
I feel it coming and I still wonder. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 172 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Kellros [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Willing to take a chance

Contributed by Kellros on Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 04:47:45 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

The dunes, the grains of sand
that fall through these hands.
Mirthful laughter awaiting,
waiting on someone worth stating.

In anger in tears,
left behind a crater of an apolyptic world,
forward facing all my fears,
waiting for oppurtunity to reappear.

Now searching, thoroughly testing these walls,
to make sure we are not doomed again to fall.
To take a red rose, rivetting the realisation,
romance is choice awaiting a situation.

No more will I be a bystander,
waiting on time no longer,
knowing now that I`ve become stronger,
I feel it coming and I still wonder.

Copyright © Kellros ... [ 2005-10-17 16:47:45]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Willing to take a chance (User Rating: 1 )
by lostrelic on Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 04:57:46 PM AEST
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ok its a nice flow but i am lost i rarely am but are in love looking for love or giving up well anyways interesting write
r.m.wilder

Re: Willing to take a chance (User Rating: 1 )
by paul_x_walker on Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 05:21:28 PM AEST
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good write atleast some one has talent around here

Re: Willing to take a chance (User Rating: 1 )
by crazy on Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 05:25:04 PM AEST
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cool poem luved it

Re: Willing to take a chance (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 05:50:18 PM AEST
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Seems there is love, yet it has to be pondered on.to keep what was, or keep what has been presented.! Hm.....depends, on what is in the heart.! Liked the write.!

Brew~

Re: Willing to take a chance (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 08:43:51 PM AEST
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I'm sure its hard, risk taking the chance, and losing everything, but also possibly gaining something amazing. Loved the write.

-Cassy

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