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Array ( [sid] => 107916 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => All I ask is you believe in me. [time] => 2005-10-17 14:11:52 [hometext] => Not sure its the right topic but it is expressing my love for my boyfriend in my way....i hope you enjoy this as it is my first write in awhile. [bodytext] =>



We lead a crazy existence,
You can sometimes be quite dense.
We need to deal with our issues,
Not forget them like old pieces of tissues.
I love you, though you do doubt it,
How do you not see it?
I may not let you see the way I think,
But how can I explain I am always on the brink.
You mean so much to me, more than you can see,
All I ask is that you believe,
Believe in it, the way you believe in me.
After all I am your cutie.
I’m your baby bunny, the one you treasure,
Even though I am so much bother.

We go from extremes of happiness,
To bouts of sadness.
When happy our feelings so intense,
Sadness makes us more tense.
Been so close to ending us,
But we always save it by remembering our lust.
The lust for our passionate love,
Instead of giving each other the shove,
You’re my baby that I hold so precious.
I feel with a whole new kind of deepness.

My only main problem is you shun my poetry,
Yet this is a way you could get to know me, yet you do not see.
It’s my expression, my work of art,
A great place for you to start.
Give me your hand and I’ll show you,
But only if you really want me to.
You do not understand why I write instead of talk,
Because the words end up stuck behind a block.
I find it hard to speak my emotions without stumbling,
Or even my tears from making it sound like mumbling.

All I ask is you believe in my love,
The way I believe in your love.






SJ



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All I ask is you believe in me.

Contributed by little_genna on Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 02:11:52 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry







We lead a crazy existence,
You can sometimes be quite dense.
We need to deal with our issues,
Not forget them like old pieces of tissues.
I love you, though you do doubt it,
How do you not see it?
I may not let you see the way I think,
But how can I explain I am always on the brink.
You mean so much to me, more than you can see,
All I ask is that you believe,
Believe in it, the way you believe in me.
After all I am your cutie.
I’m your baby bunny, the one you treasure,
Even though I am so much bother.

We go from extremes of happiness,
To bouts of sadness.
When happy our feelings so intense,
Sadness makes us more tense.
Been so close to ending us,
But we always save it by remembering our lust.
The lust for our passionate love,
Instead of giving each other the shove,
You’re my baby that I hold so precious.
I feel with a whole new kind of deepness.

My only main problem is you shun my poetry,
Yet this is a way you could get to know me, yet you do not see.
It’s my expression, my work of art,
A great place for you to start.
Give me your hand and I’ll show you,
But only if you really want me to.
You do not understand why I write instead of talk,
Because the words end up stuck behind a block.
I find it hard to speak my emotions without stumbling,
Or even my tears from making it sound like mumbling.

All I ask is you believe in my love,
The way I believe in your love.






SJ







Copyright © little_genna ... [ 2005-10-17 14:11:52]
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Re: All I ask is you believe in me. (User Rating: 1 )
by suicidal_imbecile on Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 02:21:50 PM AEST
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i like your poem because i can relate, I write because the words come out as i want them to, I dont have to be afraid that the paper will reject it, I can write without fear of discrimination, because if i dont like it, nobody has to see it. Its a way to release anger pain jelousy anything. why dont you show your boyfriend this peom?
kate


Re: All I ask is you believe in me. (User Rating: 1 )
by Mangs on Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 02:43:59 PM AEST
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"Love. Fall in love and stay in love. Write only what you love, and love what you write. The key word is love. You have to get up in the morning and write for something you love, something you live for."
Ray Bradbury


love always.... umang



Re: All I ask is you believe in me. (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 02:47:10 PM AEST
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Good writing.
Hope things work out right.
Good to see u post again.
huggs,
emy


Re: All I ask is you believe in me. (User Rating: 1 )
by lostrelic on Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 02:59:57 PM AEST
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baby bunny how cute very interesting poem very nice thoughts
r.m.wilder


Re: All I ask is you believe in me. (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 04:14:23 PM AEST
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"My only main problem is you shun my poetry,
Yet this is a way you could get to know me, yet you do not see"

Some of us find the only way to truly express ourselves is in the words we write.Some prefer the more direct approach.Sometimes love is an attraction of opposites

Steve


Re: All I ask is you believe in me. (User Rating: 1 )
by Bruce on Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 11:26:07 AM AEST
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very well written and with your true feelings. hopefully they will be heeded.


Re: All I ask is you believe in me. (User Rating: 1 )
by gmcse8 on Thursday, 16th February 2006 @ 10:27:18 AM AEST
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sorry, i laughed some at this one, not because it was funny, but kept making me think of a book I once read titled, "Women Are From Venus, Men Are From Mars." We men, young or old, take more time to "Get It",
Bob


Re: All I ask is you believe in me. (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Monday, 4th February 2019 @ 01:08:23 AM AEST
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Yes poetry is your art and fine art it is!




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