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Array ( [sid] => 107908 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Ode to Emystar [time] => 2005-10-17 11:26:30 [hometext] => Dedicated to talented, true-blue, constant, faithful and sweet Emystar [bodytext] =>




A star there is that gleams with faithfulness,
It smiles and twinkles gently from afar,
Oh may the Lord this twinkling starlet bless,
The guiding light that bards call Emystar.

The little luminary shines so bright
Consoling, steadfast, firm and vigilant,
It beams down busily upon the site
Of YPDC's azure firmament.



Apollo, passing in his chariot,
Does stop his golden car to say “Hello!”
"Good Morning Emystar - love you a lot,
But have to meet with Michelangelo!"

"But you my sweet keep showing your thumbs up,
Or down, as the necessity may be,



To monitor some wily buttercup,
And bugs that celebrate a jamboree".

The gentle beams of Emystar do shine,-
With this the muses cannot but agree,
And sweet her rhyme, as is the newest wine,
And chocklfull of originality.

The foreign-born may trouble have at times
With “2 4 u” - and many such a thing,
But then celestial are this starlet’s rhymes
That through empyrean realms sweetly ring.

How can so small a body frame contain
Like Emystar's so wide and big a heart?
This is the question on the flowery plane
And wondrous realm of poetic art



Ingenious! - she uses beams wherewith
To rouse King Hamurabi from his snooze,



That sooth Sumerian Queen Samiramis,
And heal with silver rays her hurting tooth.



King Hammuabi in his palace wrote
In ancient eras, now removed so far,
The famous weighty Hammurabi code
His heart aflame and thinking "Emystar".



The sailors in the Straight of Gibraltar,
Scared of the cliffs they have to pass at night,
Invoke with trust the beams of Emystar,
To give them for the fearful passage light.

And kids that dip into the cookie jar,
Then when discovered turn around and run,
Pray for protective beams from Emystar,
While taking flight, and run as fast they can.



See the contestants fiercely fight and spar,
Lo! in the fencing Martial Arts contest,
They turn as arbiter to Emystar
For fair a judge she is and savviest.



But ill-acquired laurel branches reek,
Thus, if they cheat, - beware then she will frown,
As did disgusted Romans and the Greek.
And instantly her little thumb points down.






See here the desert warrior Saladin,
With his bejeweled dreaded scimitar
Upon his speeding steed, whose javelin,
Flames reddish’neath the beams of Emystar.

But now she hugs the Christian Calendar,
And hears the saints that practice a new Ode,
The Blessed chant: “We love you Emystar,-
We love you and so does Almighty God!”








© Elizabeth Dandy



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Ode to Emystar

Contributed by Elizabeth_Dandy on Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 11:26:30 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems







A star there is that gleams with faithfulness,
It smiles and twinkles gently from afar,
Oh may the Lord this twinkling starlet bless,
The guiding light that bards call Emystar.

The little luminary shines so bright
Consoling, steadfast, firm and vigilant,
It beams down busily upon the site
Of YPDC's azure firmament.



Apollo, passing in his chariot,
Does stop his golden car to say “Hello!”
"Good Morning Emystar - love you a lot,
But have to meet with Michelangelo!"

"But you my sweet keep showing your thumbs up,
Or down, as the necessity may be,



To monitor some wily buttercup,
And bugs that celebrate a jamboree".

The gentle beams of Emystar do shine,-
With this the muses cannot but agree,
And sweet her rhyme, as is the newest wine,
And chocklfull of originality.

The foreign-born may trouble have at times
With “2 4 u” - and many such a thing,
But then celestial are this starlet’s rhymes
That through empyrean realms sweetly ring.

How can so small a body frame contain
Like Emystar's so wide and big a heart?
This is the question on the flowery plane
And wondrous realm of poetic art



Ingenious! - she uses beams wherewith
To rouse King Hamurabi from his snooze,



That sooth Sumerian Queen Samiramis,
And heal with silver rays her hurting tooth.



King Hammuabi in his palace wrote
In ancient eras, now removed so far,
The famous weighty Hammurabi code
His heart aflame and thinking "Emystar".



The sailors in the Straight of Gibraltar,
Scared of the cliffs they have to pass at night,
Invoke with trust the beams of Emystar,
To give them for the fearful passage light.

And kids that dip into the cookie jar,
Then when discovered turn around and run,
Pray for protective beams from Emystar,
While taking flight, and run as fast they can.



See the contestants fiercely fight and spar,
Lo! in the fencing Martial Arts contest,
They turn as arbiter to Emystar
For fair a judge she is and savviest.



But ill-acquired laurel branches reek,
Thus, if they cheat, - beware then she will frown,
As did disgusted Romans and the Greek.
And instantly her little thumb points down.






See here the desert warrior Saladin,
With his bejeweled dreaded scimitar
Upon his speeding steed, whose javelin,
Flames reddish’neath the beams of Emystar.

But now she hugs the Christian Calendar,
And hears the saints that practice a new Ode,
The Blessed chant: “We love you Emystar,-
We love you and so does Almighty God!”








© Elizabeth Dandy







Copyright © Elizabeth_Dandy ... [ 2005-10-17 11:26:30]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Ode to Emystar (User Rating: 1 )
by remote on Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 02:54:38 PM AEST
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I didn't get the second image could you tell me what that is, its quite intriguing, I'd now have to go read up more on hamurabi and sumaramis(she sure does have a great presence).


Re: Ode to Emystar (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 03:10:18 PM AEST
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Wow! my dear sweet friend and scholer this caught me by total surprize. Course it was a good surprize. U have put a smile in my heart bigger than Texas.
It is the highest honer to be the subject of one of your magnificent writes.
I really do enjoy your work and especially this beautifull work of art.
I luv u 2, my dear sweet friend and God luvs u 2.
luv, big huggs-n-smiles,
emy
Thank u from my heart-n-soul for the good lift.


Re: Ode to Emystar (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 05:16:41 PM AEST
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Elizabeth A lovely dedication to an amazing sweet lady. Emystar has touched alot of our hearts here on YPDC. Bless u both.
An outstanding remarkable write. Well done Elizabeth this is extraordinary.
*hugs*
Sue


Re: Ode to Emystar (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Wednesday, 19th October 2005 @ 02:02:37 PM AEST
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Simply Grand ED that you would remember our EmyStar in such a loving and kind way,. For that is just exactly how she is all the time!
She works so hard for all of us here at YPDC always with a smile on her face, and lack of sleep. What a dear she is, and you poem hit her right on the "Nail Head" Dead center and May God pour His Blessing upon you for your genousity of spirit and love toward one of ours!
Warm love
consue


Re: Ode to Emystar (User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 08:04:04 AM AEST
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thank you for pointing me in this direction Elizabeth...I am happy to comment on your outstanding poem to Emystar, she being awfully proud but deserves everything there is to offer....well done to the two...E's !!!!
coni


Re: Ode to Emystar (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamPoetess on Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 09:00:27 PM AEST
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Elizabeth, thank you for writing to let me know of this special gift, your wonderful respect to show affection to this very nice woman, Emystar.






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Re: Ode to Emystar (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 07:25:13 AM AEST
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Wow, I never told u my friend, that the picture of the little girl in the pink snow suit looks like one my mum had made of me.
To all that comemented on this write etc., I'ts a real pleasure to be part of this site! Mick really works hard to keep us happy. You'll are my family and what keeps me happy and shinin.
Again I'm truly touched-n-honered. I know it takes time to compose a beauty like this and friend once again u have given me a smile the size of Texas.
Luv, huggs, joy, honor 2 serve,
emy


Re: Ode to Emystar (User Rating: 1 )
by Elizabeth_Dandy on Monday, 26th December 2005 @ 12:15:17 PM AEST
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Dear viewers !
You may notice that the "Ode" has been expanded.
It is now an "Epic" (like the Iliad or Odyssee") to befittingly honor Emystar.
Blessings
Elizabeth


Re: Ode to Emystar (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 26th December 2005 @ 10:53:17 PM AEST
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Wow, wow, wow,
every time I read this I find unqenchgable strength.
Again it's a high honer to be the subject of your write.
luv u,
emy


Re: Ode to Emystar (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 5th February 2008 @ 03:32:33 AM AEST
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Dear, dear friend,
I'm just wondering how you are.
I don't hear from you anymore.
big luv,
emy




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