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when you finally realize
that no one else wants you
cuz you know
no matter what i'll still take you
after so many times i've cried
so many times i've lied to myself
so many times you've hurt my heart
after everything i still let you in
you've called me a slut
you've called me a whore
but after all you said you still
come back for more
i'm stupid, i'm a dreamer, i'm a pretender
i'm stupid for always taking you back
i'm a dreamer of you loving me
i'm a pretender of better things
i let you take my heart
and you break it everytime
soon there's going to be nothing left
other than broken peices that had once loved
a man that never loved me back

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.::.Used.::.

Contributed by pyrochick on Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 11:29:22 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

you come back to me
when you finally realize
that no one else wants you
cuz you know
no matter what i'll still take you
after so many times i've cried
so many times i've lied to myself
so many times you've hurt my heart
after everything i still let you in
you've called me a slut
you've called me a whore
but after all you said you still
come back for more
i'm stupid, i'm a dreamer, i'm a pretender
i'm stupid for always taking you back
i'm a dreamer of you loving me
i'm a pretender of better things
i let you take my heart
and you break it everytime
soon there's going to be nothing left
other than broken peices that had once loved
a man that never loved me back

Copyright © pyrochick ... [ 2005-10-16 23:29:22]
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Re: .::.Used.::. (User Rating: 1 )
by Mild_Tempest on Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 12:23:54 AM AEST
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Great "thoughts". Really deep and intense. Great write.

Re: .::.Used.::. (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 02:35:42 AM AEST
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Very sad but well written.
Someday you'll realize that u are alott more than he can ever be.
ireally hate to see any one go thru verbal abuse 'cause I've been there and it's no party for sure.
Take it easy on yourself.
He's the one that's insecure or he wouldn't treat u this way.
luv, huggs,
emy

Re: .::.Used.::. (User Rating: 1 )
by crazy on Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 06:23:55 AM AEST
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these are intense thoughts what a kool poem i was thinken how ive felf this before it sucks
i hope your doing better xoxoxoxoxoxo's

Re: .::.Used.::. (User Rating: 1 )
by vampyrekiss on Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 10:09:52 PM AEST
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This is really good and its more then random thoughts those are some hardcore feelings. haha great right and try and find someone wholl treat you like a queen
Vampyre

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