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Array ( [sid] => 107871 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Think of You [time] => 2005-10-16 22:04:07 [hometext] => I wrote this song about a girl. We dated on and off for a while and then lost contact for a year. We ran into each other again, started dating again, and got serious, or so I thought... [bodytext] => many days ago
when I was alone
never thought I would see
this reflection of me
but it's staring at my face
and I can't trace
the reason for my pain
except for your name
the echo in my ears
is burning out my eyes
blood flows like tears
from the jagged knife
you thrusted in my back
and left me there to bleed
so much for tomorrow
and our eternity

but still I think of you
and what should have been
I think of you
every now and then

do you recall
the way you held my hand
and how it felt
being together again
the timing was right
for all I could tell
but inside you were dreaming
of somebody else
perhaps it was your plan
to fill a summer void
and as an easy victim
my heart was destroyed

but still I think of you
and what should have been
I think of you
every now and then

do you miss
the laughs we had
holding me
was just a fad
if I could
I'd rewind time
erasing you
from my mind
but you're there
everywhere I go
reminding me
I'm dying slow

but still I think of you
and what should have been
I think of you
every now and then

time heals all wounds
we've both moved on
but part of me stayed
to write this song
I hoped you'd turn around
even if just to look
but the last chapter is done
I'll shut the book

-djs 8/10/03
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Think of You

Contributed by djs on Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 10:04:07 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

many days ago
when I was alone
never thought I would see
this reflection of me
but it's staring at my face
and I can't trace
the reason for my pain
except for your name
the echo in my ears
is burning out my eyes
blood flows like tears
from the jagged knife
you thrusted in my back
and left me there to bleed
so much for tomorrow
and our eternity

but still I think of you
and what should have been
I think of you
every now and then

do you recall
the way you held my hand
and how it felt
being together again
the timing was right
for all I could tell
but inside you were dreaming
of somebody else
perhaps it was your plan
to fill a summer void
and as an easy victim
my heart was destroyed

but still I think of you
and what should have been
I think of you
every now and then

do you miss
the laughs we had
holding me
was just a fad
if I could
I'd rewind time
erasing you
from my mind
but you're there
everywhere I go
reminding me
I'm dying slow

but still I think of you
and what should have been
I think of you
every now and then

time heals all wounds
we've both moved on
but part of me stayed
to write this song
I hoped you'd turn around
even if just to look
but the last chapter is done
I'll shut the book

-djs 8/10/03

Copyright © djs ... [ 2005-10-16 22:04:07]
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Re: Think of You (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 01:16:36 AM AEST
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Now see there, how well you explained your feelings, I would say, to keep writing, shut the book on perhaps that feeling, then open the book up, and there you have a new page, a new life, each day begins a new.. keep writing my friend, this is terrific.

Raquel Leah :D

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