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they say
cut off his arms pull off his eye lids
sew his lips together
make him scream bloody murder
demented thoughts run through my head
i wonder why
i try to make them stop
but they keep coming
No! Shut Up!
i dont want to kill
ill just take these pills
it will end all the demented things
that crawl in the dark depths of my mind
im running out of time
before i stop the tormenting and fun games we play
the voices say yes do it do it
but im scared
so KILL ! KILL !KILL !
the demented voices say
to dig dig dig
starts to rain now i can feel the pain
stabed in the back by myself
the demented voices say
to be at peace i must
torcher the poor helpless people
i say yes i will
i stop and think
i realize the demented voices
were my own the whole time [comments] => 3 [counter] => 184 [topic] => 13 [informant] => crazy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

demented

Contributed by crazy on Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 09:12:43 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

the voices in my head tellme things
they say
cut off his arms pull off his eye lids
sew his lips together
make him scream bloody murder
demented thoughts run through my head
i wonder why
i try to make them stop
but they keep coming
No! Shut Up!
i dont want to kill
ill just take these pills
it will end all the demented things
that crawl in the dark depths of my mind
im running out of time
before i stop the tormenting and fun games we play
the voices say yes do it do it
but im scared
so KILL ! KILL !KILL !
the demented voices say
to dig dig dig
starts to rain now i can feel the pain
stabed in the back by myself
the demented voices say
to be at peace i must
torcher the poor helpless people
i say yes i will
i stop and think
i realize the demented voices
were my own the whole time

Copyright © crazy ... [ 2005-10-16 21:12:43]
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Re: demented (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 09:32:23 PM AEST
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I like the dark...... cept this gave me chills so Im off to lock my doors now, thanks thanks alot! ( huge grins) Good job on this one

Michelle

Re: demented (User Rating: 1 )
by djs on Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 10:22:49 PM AEST
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hey, i like the twist you threw in here at the end about the voices being your own. very nice!!!

Re: demented (User Rating: 1 )
by romance_pyro on Saturday, 22nd October 2005 @ 02:45:20 PM AEST
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Umm do i really wanna come home to you now lol. Kinda creepy poem but its alright.

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