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Array ( [sid] => 107842 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Wishes [time] => 2005-10-16 15:22:33 [hometext] => Things Happen For A Reason, Thats Why Im So Happy Now [bodytext] => I wish I could hold you
deep in my arms
and finally find the reason
why I'm here.

I wish I could dry my tears
on your old carhart jacket
and kiss my cares away.

I wish she wasn't in the picture
so you would have me
all to yourself
but she won, and I am all alone.

I wish I could ride in your old ford
and scream out of your back window
how much I loved you
but I can't
because she says it now
in tainted whispers.

I wish I could bury
my pain in you
but that's her job now
as you are just a memory,
an old discarded photo
from my past,
and you will never know
how much you really meant to me.

You had a chance
but blew it on someone else
and I kind of wonder
if the tables were turned
would you have picked me
instead of her all along? [comments] => 2 [counter] => 165 [topic] => 48 [informant] => LittleSweetAllStreet [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Wishes

Contributed by LittleSweetAllStreet on Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 03:22:33 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I wish I could hold you
deep in my arms
and finally find the reason
why I'm here.

I wish I could dry my tears
on your old carhart jacket
and kiss my cares away.

I wish she wasn't in the picture
so you would have me
all to yourself
but she won, and I am all alone.

I wish I could ride in your old ford
and scream out of your back window
how much I loved you
but I can't
because she says it now
in tainted whispers.

I wish I could bury
my pain in you
but that's her job now
as you are just a memory,
an old discarded photo
from my past,
and you will never know
how much you really meant to me.

You had a chance
but blew it on someone else
and I kind of wonder
if the tables were turned
would you have picked me
instead of her all along?

Copyright © LittleSweetAllStreet ... [ 2005-10-16 15:22:33]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Wishes (User Rating: 1 )
by europeanprincess on Saturday, 2nd September 2006 @ 10:31:50 PM AEST
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I know what you are trying ot say, but i feel there was something missing. I feel that you should try another and tell us how you feel and wish now. Please keep writing.

Re: Wishes (User Rating: 1 )
by Channing on Sunday, 3rd September 2006 @ 07:04:44 PM AEST
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Sad, but it's something that happens constantly. Good write.

-Channing-

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