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I find my heart in peices on the ground.

I am tired of being hurt.
I am tired of you treating me like dirt.

Open you eyes so you can see,
How much you and your love meam to me.

I love you with all of my heart,
Which you are slowly tearing apart.

I love you so much!
You're just to blind to see.
You're blinded by what the other use to do,
But that's them and not me!

I will never hurt you!
I will always be true!

So open your beautiful eyes
And let me love you! [comments] => 7 [counter] => 216 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Babyjay [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Let Me Love You

Contributed by Babyjay on Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 03:06:55 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Everytime I turn around,
I find my heart in peices on the ground.

I am tired of being hurt.
I am tired of you treating me like dirt.

Open you eyes so you can see,
How much you and your love meam to me.

I love you with all of my heart,
Which you are slowly tearing apart.

I love you so much!
You're just to blind to see.
You're blinded by what the other use to do,
But that's them and not me!

I will never hurt you!
I will always be true!

So open your beautiful eyes
And let me love you!

Copyright © Babyjay ... [ 2005-10-16 03:06:55]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Let Me Love You (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 03:47:04 AM AEST
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I can relate to this one but the my ex was the one fooling around, not me.
good write and I hope yours turns out different.
huggs,
emy

Re: Let Me Love You (User Rating: 1 )
by RickShaw on Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 05:08:28 AM AEST
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Very nice poem your husband is a lucky man give him one more chance then dump him.
You should show him this poem

Re: Let Me Love You (User Rating: 1 )
by jheng on Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 06:09:22 AM AEST
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great write, i can truly relate with your poem

Re: Let Me Love You (User Rating: 1 )
by grim6669 on Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 12:29:30 PM AEST
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i can really relate to this. one of my ex's from a long time ago used to do the same thing to me. ....... so i dumped him!..........i never really cared for him though. so i was able to just dump him with out any problams. ..........besides him calling me for the next 2 months of my life ...crying!.......... he was never special enough to write a poem about. .......... i guess that's why you haven't ended it with your husband. .......you love him too much........just tell him how you feel or show him this poem........ things should get better for you................well nice write........hope things get better.............
good luck
~amber~

Re: Let Me Love You (User Rating: 1 )
by grim6669 on Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 12:30:49 PM AEST
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*problems.......(i spelled that wrong.......typo)

Re: Let Me Love You (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 04:53:27 PM AEST
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Great write, I've been accused before, it'll work out. Great write.

-Cassy

Re: Let Me Love You (User Rating: 1 )
by SeanMcHaney on Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 01:39:51 AM AEST
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so beautiful and so sad...

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