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You thought you can get away with it
But you thought wrong
I'm stronger than you
And so much better
You tore me apart
You ripped me to shreds
And expect me to take you back
And trust you again
But I'm not stupid
To be hurt by you again
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You Thought Wrong

Contributed by Sewntogether on Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 11:18:36 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

You think you can do this
You thought you can get away with it
But you thought wrong
I'm stronger than you
And so much better
You tore me apart
You ripped me to shreds
And expect me to take you back
And trust you again
But I'm not stupid
To be hurt by you again

Copyright © Sewntogether ... [ 2005-10-15 23:18:36]
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Re: You Thought Wrong (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamPoetess on Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 12:11:09 AM AEST
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angry writer, reader sad reading it. nice short poem, and a lot said.

Meagan

Re: You Thought Wrong (User Rating: 1 )
by sarankrish on Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 01:04:11 AM AEST
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Good work ...

Re: You Thought Wrong (User Rating: 1 )
by jheng on Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 06:12:14 AM AEST
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nice write. hope i also have the courage of not trusting those who hurt me

Re: You Thought Wrong (User Rating: 1 )
by Dark_and_Cold on Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 09:08:06 AM AEST
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Reminds me of a poem I just posted called "Plaything". Nice write.

Re: You Thought Wrong (User Rating: 1 )
by ChibiMiroku on Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 10:04:28 PM AEST
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"Fool me once, shame on me; Fool me twice, shame on you." -Proverb
I'm all for giving second chances. Because if they screw up again, I can mess them over with a nice, clean conscience.
But eh. I liked the feeling I got out of this, even though it was short and to the point. So much the better for an angry poem, though. Eh.

Good write!

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