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No longer, dare I dream-
For a heart now empty-
Sees not, but love’s delusion-
As the future now holds no reward’s…

Hope exists not for I-
My soul now torn away-
Left unaided, currently empty and cold-
Now teary for what might have become…

The mind unfilled, yet full-
As empty laughter rings out loud-
And silent pleas go unheard upon deaf ears-
While remnants of yesterday linger and taunt…

A smile, now worn without pride-
Only a simple expression for all to see-
Holds fast to hide my pain within-
Binding tight the hurting of love nevermore…

No longer, dare I dream-
Of expectations that could have been-
Yet held no chance to survive the past-
For to do so is only to find pain…

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No Longer, Dare I Dream

Contributed by hoist1atca on Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 08:46:06 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

No longer, dare I dream-
For a heart now empty-
Sees not, but love’s delusion-
As the future now holds no reward’s…

Hope exists not for I-
My soul now torn away-
Left unaided, currently empty and cold-
Now teary for what might have become…

The mind unfilled, yet full-
As empty laughter rings out loud-
And silent pleas go unheard upon deaf ears-
While remnants of yesterday linger and taunt…

A smile, now worn without pride-
Only a simple expression for all to see-
Holds fast to hide my pain within-
Binding tight the hurting of love nevermore…

No longer, dare I dream-
Of expectations that could have been-
Yet held no chance to survive the past-
For to do so is only to find pain…

Copyright Â© hoist1atca ... [ 2005-10-15 20:46:06]
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Re: No Longer, Dare I Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by crazy on Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 09:17:38 PM AEST
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wow i know the feelings of your poem i can relate on many different levels such a beautiful poem nice job

Re: No Longer, Dare I Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by tinamarie on Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 08:08:47 AM AEST
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i like your poem...very deep

Re: No Longer, Dare I Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Dark_and_Cold on Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 09:14:58 AM AEST
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Nice poem...full of pain...but then again, so are all mine lol...

Re: No Longer, Dare I Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 10:01:34 AM AEST
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Oh, dearest Joe ...
I hope everything is okay with you. This is such a sad,
albeit brilliant, write. Such utter bereavement drips from
those lines ...
(I'm only a PM away my friend ...)

*hugs to you*
~Breezy

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