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Array ( [sid] => 107801 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Angel Astray [time] => 2005-10-15 18:46:15 [hometext] => This is about a girl that I care a lot about. She is extremely nice and always tries to stay positive. However, several people she was close with have passed away recently and she is hurting badly. I worry about her. [bodytext] => the angel of hope has lost her way,
she sits alone,
crying,
as her radiance fades
there once was a time,
when she was not afraid,
but with each fallen star,
she questions her faith
off in the distance
head in her hands,
lonesome and dejected,
cursing God's plan
how could this happen?
why now? why today?
if i could i would
take away all of her pain
and give her the strength
that she gave to me
the strength and the faith
to always believe
angel of hope,
dust off your wings
because without your smile,
this world is incomplete
please come out isolation,
for it's ok to cry,
but let those whom you've helped,
help you restore your faith in life.

-djs 9/24/05

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Angel Astray

Contributed by djs on Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 06:46:15 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

the angel of hope has lost her way,
she sits alone,
crying,
as her radiance fades
there once was a time,
when she was not afraid,
but with each fallen star,
she questions her faith
off in the distance
head in her hands,
lonesome and dejected,
cursing God's plan
how could this happen?
why now? why today?
if i could i would
take away all of her pain
and give her the strength
that she gave to me
the strength and the faith
to always believe
angel of hope,
dust off your wings
because without your smile,
this world is incomplete
please come out isolation,
for it's ok to cry,
but let those whom you've helped,
help you restore your faith in life.

-djs 9/24/05

Copyright © djs ... [ 2005-10-15 18:46:15]
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Re: Angel Astray (User Rating: 1 )
by crazy on Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 07:38:25 PM AEST
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wow this is such a nice poem tell your friend i hope she is ok for tomorrow is another day
i love you poetry you have great skill
beautiful poem

Re: Angel Astray (User Rating: 1 )
by tinamarie on Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 08:14:08 AM AEST
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I LOVE THAT POEM!!!!!

Re: Angel Astray (User Rating: 1 )
by Dark_and_Cold on Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 09:16:11 AM AEST
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Beautifull.

Re: Angel Astray (User Rating: 1 )
by ChibiMiroku on Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 11:30:39 PM AEST
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Nicely done; and I hope she gets better soon!

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