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Array ( [sid] => 107744 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Mucronate Ceramic (evergreen leaves fall) [time] => 2005-10-14 18:38:32 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Mucronate Ceramic
(evergreen leaves fall)



slipping slippingslipping slipping slippingslipping…


It’s all black in here the way a tornado looks inside
my dilated eyes
zoomed in so you can see the flicker
ing and the way it is grey


this is too bad for me
how the evergreen leaves fall
Brown though I must avoid it and even though
they say it never to be so and not allowed

Like me.



Please, my skull is being bludgeoned.
Pulverized flesh and dark hair all matted
in a painful revisiting of a hoped-to-be-forgotten past.
Like my parents though i knew they would never want me back,
this is a delusion of my own delirious fantasies.



Hours spent cuddling green
inside my head surrounded
Enveloped by softened melted
smiles I hope one day to be mine…


Love of self-induced oblivion…








Love me not.

Like my piggy bank with starry eyes and a tail spiraling like sand and heartburn emotions
shattered with a hammer i can’t figure out who’s hand
aciculate hastate denticulate spinose
Mucronate Ceramic;
shards too deep to remember as merely yesterday.





Shivers like epilepsy and torn fabric of a bluish red.
Screwed by the jawbone to the rib cage to never look up.
A ponderous wondering as to the future of my atrophy…














[2005-10-14 09:45:44]

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Mucronate Ceramic (evergreen leaves fall)

Contributed by SensitiveSoAbused on Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 06:38:32 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Mucronate Ceramic
(evergreen leaves fall)



slipping slippingslipping slipping slippingslipping…


It’s all black in here the way a tornado looks inside
my dilated eyes
zoomed in so you can see the flicker
ing and the way it is grey


this is too bad for me
how the evergreen leaves fall
Brown though I must avoid it and even though
they say it never to be so and not allowed

Like me.



Please, my skull is being bludgeoned.
Pulverized flesh and dark hair all matted
in a painful revisiting of a hoped-to-be-forgotten past.
Like my parents though i knew they would never want me back,
this is a delusion of my own delirious fantasies.



Hours spent cuddling green
inside my head surrounded
Enveloped by softened melted
smiles I hope one day to be mine…


Love of self-induced oblivion…








Love me not.

Like my piggy bank with starry eyes and a tail spiraling like sand and heartburn emotions
shattered with a hammer i can’t figure out who’s hand
aciculate hastate denticulate spinose
Mucronate Ceramic;
shards too deep to remember as merely yesterday.





Shivers like epilepsy and torn fabric of a bluish red.
Screwed by the jawbone to the rib cage to never look up.
A ponderous wondering as to the future of my atrophy…














[2005-10-14 09:45:44]





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Re: Mucronate Ceramic (evergreen leaves fall) (User Rating: 1 )
by crazy on Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 06:42:45 PM AEST
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this is crazy i loved its awardness its so kool killer write


Re: Mucronate Ceramic (evergreen leaves fall) (User Rating: 1 )
by Dark_and_Cold on Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 08:32:52 PM AEST
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Nice job, it's content is all over the place but still all together it makes sense.


Re: Mucronate Ceramic (evergreen leaves fall) (User Rating: 1 )
by guiltycircles on Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 10:51:00 PM AEST
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babe this is awesome...i love its deep darkness and unrestrained flow, well done


Re: Mucronate Ceramic (evergreen leaves fall) (User Rating: 1 )
by remote on Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 03:37:56 PM AEST
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I have no clue what "aciculate hastate denticulate spinose
Mucronate Ceramic" mean, stil found this quite an interesting read.


Re: Mucronate Ceramic (evergreen leaves fall) (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Wednesday, 19th October 2005 @ 01:11:00 AM AEST
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I liked this my dear friend although I am not
to sure what its about. Very odd, but I like it.

Bobo (Joel)




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