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color
Contributed by
fallensilence
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Sunday, 19th January 2003 @ 10:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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i saw the words fall from your mouth
i felt the pain stab through my heart
i never expected to hear that from you
my eyes have died and been reborn
-red
the color of happiness...the only happiness ill ever have
i haven't spoken since that day
i can't even hear
im haunted by your words
my heart is full of fear
-grey
the color of my life- the only life i've ever had
your tears have destroyed my hate
i'll dye my eyes to please you
crying through the words
-blue
the color of how i'll always feel inside
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2003-01-19 22:00:00]
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Re: color
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by BlackAngel on
Wednesday, 29th January 2003 @ 02:08:15 PM AEST
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| o0o..that has a nice flow to it..i like it |
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Re: color
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by tease_whizz on
Thursday, 27th February 2003 @ 04:40:56 PM AEST
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| this is so vivid and full of emotion - i love the use of colour to convey feeling...excellent write, keep them coming. Kate x |
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