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Array ( [sid] => 107680 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => in side my head [time] => 2005-10-13 19:37:49 [hometext] => ok i have 2 different parts to this one poem ill put both in thow i wrote this today in spanish class i didnt feel like listening to the teacher hope you like it [bodytext] => in side my head there is a little world
i go there to become free
all i see around me
is stll a mystery

in side my world i see just what will happen to me
i sit underneath myself hiding who i really am

in side my head i think
think of how bad it must be
wondering how to do this or that
all getting mixed up and twisted around
wishing never to be found
its freaky scary and werid
its just what people have fearded afraid of myself and what i might do
always trying t kill you
OTHER SENTENCE
afraid of myself all the pain and hate
never wanting to wait
waiting for the right time to die

inside my head there is a girl
shes tired of being me all sad and lonly
acting like a foney
she will break free
all will see just how much she is like me

in side my head we sit and wait
never knowing about our fate

in side my head there is a world
i go there to become free
all i see around me
is still a mystery [comments] => 2 [counter] => 224 [topic] => 13 [informant] => crazy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
in side my head

Contributed by crazy on Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 07:37:49 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



in side my head there is a little world
i go there to become free
all i see around me
is stll a mystery

in side my world i see just what will happen to me
i sit underneath myself hiding who i really am

in side my head i think
think of how bad it must be
wondering how to do this or that
all getting mixed up and twisted around
wishing never to be found
its freaky scary and werid
its just what people have fearded afraid of myself and what i might do
always trying t kill you
OTHER SENTENCE
afraid of myself all the pain and hate
never wanting to wait
waiting for the right time to die

inside my head there is a girl
shes tired of being me all sad and lonly
acting like a foney
she will break free
all will see just how much she is like me

in side my head we sit and wait
never knowing about our fate

in side my head there is a world
i go there to become free
all i see around me
is still a mystery




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Re: in side my head (User Rating: 1 )
by fredsmith on Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 09:28:50 PM AEST
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nice poem 5/5
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Re: in side my head (User Rating: 1 )
by sararose1950 on Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 07:06:56 PM AEST
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I really liked the last parts- we all harbour our true selfs inside-in our own special place- nicely written




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