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Array ( [sid] => 107679 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Shooting Star Swarm [time] => 2005-10-13 19:36:41 [hometext] => You so skillfully tell of nights that can't be captured in words;If I can't touch you, it's the same as if I didn't exist. [bodytext] => You so skillfully tell of nights that can't be captured in words
Telling me that the entwined, tepid ivys
Are all an illusion

Give me a soul, even if it's made by your own hands
As long as I've a place to cry, I needn't see the stars

Your calling voice always turns into sadness
Just proving to me that I am this ugly
But I still need it

If you can't touch me, it's the same as if I didn't exist

Days that pass only in ambiguity endlessly push me to loneliness
Binding me until I've nothing more to wish for
When they fade

Intoning my love, even a subtle vibration
Causes it to reverberate to the overflowing

Miracles and the like abandon this flesh in a split-second
Just teaching me that I am this powerless
But I still need them

If I can't touch you, it's the same as if I didn't exist

Though it's just obstructing countless meanings
I don't even know if I'm beautiful or not here, even now

Your calling voice always turns into sadness
Just proving to me that I am this ugly
But I still need it

If you can't touch me, it's the same as if I didn't exist [comments] => 2 [counter] => 142 [topic] => 43 [informant] => RAGEyourDREAM [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
Shooting Star Swarm

Contributed by RAGEyourDREAM on Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 07:36:41 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



You so skillfully tell of nights that can't be captured in words
Telling me that the entwined, tepid ivys
Are all an illusion

Give me a soul, even if it's made by your own hands
As long as I've a place to cry, I needn't see the stars

Your calling voice always turns into sadness
Just proving to me that I am this ugly
But I still need it

If you can't touch me, it's the same as if I didn't exist

Days that pass only in ambiguity endlessly push me to loneliness
Binding me until I've nothing more to wish for
When they fade

Intoning my love, even a subtle vibration
Causes it to reverberate to the overflowing

Miracles and the like abandon this flesh in a split-second
Just teaching me that I am this powerless
But I still need them

If I can't touch you, it's the same as if I didn't exist

Though it's just obstructing countless meanings
I don't even know if I'm beautiful or not here, even now

Your calling voice always turns into sadness
Just proving to me that I am this ugly
But I still need it

If you can't touch me, it's the same as if I didn't exist




Copyright © RAGEyourDREAM ... [ 2005-10-13 19:36:41]
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Re: Shooting Star Swarm (User Rating: 1 )
by crazy on Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 08:07:59 PM AEST
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wow it really capures your theme really well very expressive good write


Re: Shooting Star Swarm (User Rating: 1 )
by Dark_and_Cold on Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 08:23:02 PM AEST
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I really liked this...the night has always been more my time than the day, and the dream always a sweeter reality, perhaps that's why my writing also often involves dreams ..Thank you for sharing it...

Brandin




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