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Array ( [sid] => 107635 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => “Nija” [time] => 2005-10-13 02:47:06 [hometext] => this is was written with deep reflection on the present and past events in my country (Nigeria) [bodytext] => I know a certain river
Across it lives Miss Nija
She is but turned to a pretty old hag
Been married in time past but to some false lads
Now she suffers the need for a good prince
Whose words in quality must not be minced

It is not been long
She awakened to a new wedding song
and danced to the tune of her new prince
But found in him a different music
Forty-four years, corrupt minds have sheared her bed
only tears and sorrows have they left her shed

Nija’s bed has been a field of play
Where many princes have plundered her clay
and they left her in her breeches
as they devoured her many riches
her oily clay won’t protect her from decay
she looks at her bed in dismay

She looks for a good prince
A miracle must she pray for, since
the gods have tried and tied of her ways
And to their beds must they make haste
So Nija in her state should lie waste.
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 219 [topic] => 41 [informant] => strider [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => political )
“Nija”

Contributed by strider on Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 02:47:06 AM in AEST
Topic: political



I know a certain river
Across it lives Miss Nija
She is but turned to a pretty old hag
Been married in time past but to some false lads
Now she suffers the need for a good prince
Whose words in quality must not be minced

It is not been long
She awakened to a new wedding song
and danced to the tune of her new prince
But found in him a different music
Forty-four years, corrupt minds have sheared her bed
only tears and sorrows have they left her shed

Nija’s bed has been a field of play
Where many princes have plundered her clay
and they left her in her breeches
as they devoured her many riches
her oily clay won’t protect her from decay
she looks at her bed in dismay

She looks for a good prince
A miracle must she pray for, since
the gods have tried and tied of her ways
And to their beds must they make haste
So Nija in her state should lie waste.




Copyright © strider ... [ 2005-10-13 02:47:06]
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Re: “Nija” (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 04:46:57 AM AEST
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Very creative, interesting write.
huggs,
emy


Re: “Nija” (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 07:56:25 AM AEST
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the rhyming scheme was good the stoey line good heck I liked all of if,,,well done,,,Eddy


Re: “Nija” (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 06:33:25 AM AEST
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A rather interesting write you present before us Felix. I liked the flow of this one and the rhyming was good. With each write you are improving. Well done and keep up the great work dear Felix.
*hugs*
Sue




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