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I’m wearing my skin today.

It crawls and whimpers for a touch
of magical fingertips, of salacious hands…
Come, lonely stranger,
But don’t come yet…

~Morbid addiction reawakened~

All I want is your body because I don’t need you,
And what I need doesn’t matter because I’ve got you inside me,
And I don’t know who I am anymore,

And I don’t care

And… oh god… this is too perfect,
Too tangible that it’s surreal…

-Don’t stop… please… Don’t stop killing me…-

I smell like a virgin.
Smothered in secretions of lust.
Humid. Smoldering.

My thighs are quaking

And it’s all your fault.

(((Love me like the slut that I am…
Hold me… like the child that I wish to be…)))

Take all that I am, and ravage me,
Never mind these dry tears and reckless pleas,
Tighten the cuffs and grind a little deeper,

Dominate me, sir, because I won’t have it
any other way.

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Ravenous

Contributed by FleurdeSang on Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 04:57:13 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I’m wearing my skin today.

It crawls and whimpers for a touch
of magical fingertips, of salacious hands…
Come, lonely stranger,
But don’t come yet…

~Morbid addiction reawakened~

All I want is your body because I don’t need you,
And what I need doesn’t matter because I’ve got you inside me,
And I don’t know who I am anymore,

And I don’t care

And… oh god… this is too perfect,
Too tangible that it’s surreal…

-Don’t stop… please… Don’t stop killing me…-

I smell like a virgin.
Smothered in secretions of lust.
Humid. Smoldering.

My thighs are quaking

And it’s all your fault.

(((Love me like the slut that I am…
Hold me… like the child that I wish to be…)))

Take all that I am, and ravage me,
Never mind these dry tears and reckless pleas,
Tighten the cuffs and grind a little deeper,

Dominate me, sir, because I won’t have it
any other way.

Copyright Â© FleurdeSang ... [ 2005-10-11 16:57:13]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Ravenous (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 05:13:30 PM AEST
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Amost emphatic quest in2 the darkside of the
heart, beautiful as always, deep and emotionaly breath taking . . .

(((((((((stephy)))))))))))

Ben

Re: Ravenous (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 05:18:52 PM AEST
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woawwwwwwww Steph whewwwww this is HOT HOT HOT ooooooo I love this side of you my beautiful little flower. Iv missed you hope that all is well with you

Michelle

Re: Ravenous (User Rating: 1 )
by MetalheadSD on Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 05:48:54 PM AEST
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wow that was powerful. Great job. I enjoyed that.

Re: Ravenous (User Rating: 1 )
by guiltycircles on Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 09:43:44 PM AEST
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this is awesome, i love it so much, nice powerful write well done

Re: Ravenous (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 10:01:16 PM AEST
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Deep, erotic, and sensual...yet to keep the ones,,,,,,,guessing to what could or will be.! Great write.!

Brew~

Re: Ravenous (User Rating: 1 )
by tweaks2004 on Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 08:48:15 AM AEST
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I smell like a virgin.
Smothered in secretions of lust.
Humid. Smoldering.

that ***** was bad ass youve definately have a talent for the dark

Re: Ravenous (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 11:48:49 AM AEST
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You little vixen you lol.

This was raw and full of orgasmic pleasure.
Hot and steamy stuff
Goes to cool of in the shower

Superb write

Love Angelxxx

Re: Ravenous (User Rating: 1 )
by Ravensfire on Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 02:45:28 PM AEST
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Agrees with brew, very erotic, great write!

Re: Ravenous (User Rating: 1 )
by emphaticplacebo on Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 04:48:55 AM AEST
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Wow Steph, this is indeed a revelation to another side of your poetry I hadnt discovered til now. Sexual, violent and emotional; you have created yet another masterpiece, and despite its unconventional (not a bad thing my any stretch of the imagination) content, I absolutely loved reading it, and no doubt, shall read it again. Thanks for sharing your beautiful mind once again.

Dan

Re: Ravenous (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Wednesday, 19th October 2005 @ 12:57:03 AM AEST
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Oooh filthy indeed... I'm in a rather fithy mood
right now as well so I enjoyed it immensely ;)
Yes, I've been away for a while, but I am back
now. I liked this poem written with style, yet
covered in dirt. Keep it up.

Bobo (Joel)

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