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Array ( [sid] => 107511 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A song for my wife [time] => 2005-10-11 15:27:21 [hometext] => I haven't met her yet, But I assure you all this is what i will feel when i do. [bodytext] => I've been here waiting
Don't know what i'm waiting for
I've been here watching
Hoping it's you i've been looking for
Can't help but notice
That your eyes are a lovely green
Can't help but wonder
If you're the prettiest girl i've seen

And now I'm haunted
By beauty so clean and pure
I've not the courage
To find the source for the cure
Been manifested
With answers to questions asked
And yet I'm too scared
To try to make this moment last

And Yes I want, want this to last
for more than a moment for Moments past
Are haunting me and all that I am
Yesterday and forever this began
So take my hand, We'll wipe the past away
Take my heart and together we'll stay
I'll never leave you, you'll never leave me
It just starts now with me believing...

So now I smile
For I know I can't give up
Surely she feels this too
Surely she wants to feel loved
I Hope She'll notice
I've been ready for all of this time
I hope She'll realize
I've been waiting for this all my life

I'm so very scared
Of what she might say
Will she frown at me?
Will she simply run away?
Oh wont you darling
Listen to me just this once
I beg your attention
And you may choose when I'm done

And Yes I want, want this to last
for more than a moment for moments past
Have taken control of all i've become
Till now and forever this moments begun
For all that I am and everything that's in me
I want you forever, and all of eternity's
power can not change the way that I feel
please tell me all that i'm feeling is real.

So I'll take your hand, We'll wipe the past away
I'll take your heart and together we'll stay
Oh darling please will you never leave me
Because of you, Now I truly believe...


[comments] => 3 [counter] => 211 [topic] => 2 [informant] => tecnorobo [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
A song for my wife

Contributed by tecnorobo on Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 03:27:21 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



I've been here waiting
Don't know what i'm waiting for
I've been here watching
Hoping it's you i've been looking for
Can't help but notice
That your eyes are a lovely green
Can't help but wonder
If you're the prettiest girl i've seen

And now I'm haunted
By beauty so clean and pure
I've not the courage
To find the source for the cure
Been manifested
With answers to questions asked
And yet I'm too scared
To try to make this moment last

And Yes I want, want this to last
for more than a moment for Moments past
Are haunting me and all that I am
Yesterday and forever this began
So take my hand, We'll wipe the past away
Take my heart and together we'll stay
I'll never leave you, you'll never leave me
It just starts now with me believing...

So now I smile
For I know I can't give up
Surely she feels this too
Surely she wants to feel loved
I Hope She'll notice
I've been ready for all of this time
I hope She'll realize
I've been waiting for this all my life

I'm so very scared
Of what she might say
Will she frown at me?
Will she simply run away?
Oh wont you darling
Listen to me just this once
I beg your attention
And you may choose when I'm done

And Yes I want, want this to last
for more than a moment for moments past
Have taken control of all i've become
Till now and forever this moments begun
For all that I am and everything that's in me
I want you forever, and all of eternity's
power can not change the way that I feel
please tell me all that i'm feeling is real.

So I'll take your hand, We'll wipe the past away
I'll take your heart and together we'll stay
Oh darling please will you never leave me
Because of you, Now I truly believe...






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Re: A song for my wife (User Rating: 1 )
by lostrelic on Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 03:44:21 PM AEST
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interesting heart felt write
r.m.wilder


Re: A song for my wife (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 04:25:50 PM AEST
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This is beautiful.. Save this song.. poem, when you meet her, ask her hand.. this perhaps, will be read by you to her at your wedding..

I believe you will find her, if she does not find you first.

Lovely song.. poem..

Raquel Leah :D


Re: A song for my wife (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 10:48:53 PM AEST
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Hmmm, very beautiful song, this could be the one you sit, and play and then let her, know it WAS written, solely, for her.! Wonderful song......vivid tunes, play while reading.

Brew~




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