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Array ( [sid] => 107507 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => tomorrow [time] => 2005-10-11 11:33:26 [hometext] => [bodytext] => tomorrow

i can see what none will know
hidden around a doubt
is man whos love cant show

to spend a day in beautys eye
and see what worries none
never think about tommorrow
incase your memories are done

minute turns to smiles,
a gaurd goes down
long to hear the verbal noun

i can tell you everything
that i thought an age ago
but now is lost in weakened knees
hide your trembel, not to show

for you today i would walk on coal
to see if eyes would wide
for you today i would catch your tears
to see if pool would dry

for you today i would woman better be
to see a striaght return
for you today i would hold your hand
in chance your path will turn

efforts fail and eyes stay shut
to live in a world thought built
hand to mouth i see no guilt

knowing what is right
is different from what is earned
you claimed me rightful woman
but never good was learned
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 185 [topic] => 24 [informant] => Boobiepeach [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )

tomorrow

Contributed by Boobiepeach on Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 11:33:26 AM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

tomorrow

i can see what none will know
hidden around a doubt
is man whos love cant show

to spend a day in beautys eye
and see what worries none
never think about tommorrow
incase your memories are done

minute turns to smiles,
a gaurd goes down
long to hear the verbal noun

i can tell you everything
that i thought an age ago
but now is lost in weakened knees
hide your trembel, not to show

for you today i would walk on coal
to see if eyes would wide
for you today i would catch your tears
to see if pool would dry

for you today i would woman better be
to see a striaght return
for you today i would hold your hand
in chance your path will turn

efforts fail and eyes stay shut
to live in a world thought built
hand to mouth i see no guilt

knowing what is right
is different from what is earned
you claimed me rightful woman
but never good was learned

Copyright © Boobiepeach ... [ 2005-10-11 11:33:26]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: tomorrow (User Rating: 1 )
by lostrelic on Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 03:00:32 PM AEST
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interesting write very lovely flow are you a rightful women?
r.m.wilder

Re: tomorrow (User Rating: 1 )
by candysears on Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 06:25:14 PM AEST
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Very good write....
God Bless!

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