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Array ( [sid] => 107502 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => FEELING WHOLE [time] => 2005-10-11 09:28:14 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Your are my lover
you are the one for me
you never dissapoint or let me down
i''m so addicted to you, your the only one
the only one for me.
you are so serious,
but you teach me.
you taught me, you give to me,
i love , i want you, i need you
my life is whole with you.
i hold you deep
i have you deep within me stay with me my love
hold on to me.
i''m whole
i''m whole
i''m so whole with you
stay with me
your in my soul
you are the one for me
never leave me, my love
i want you
i want you with me
you are the one to fulfill me
you are the for me
love me, love you [comments] => 2 [counter] => 230 [topic] => 54 [informant] => rie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => happypoetry )
FEELING WHOLE

Contributed by rie on Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 09:28:14 AM in AEST
Topic: happypoetry



Your are my lover
you are the one for me
you never dissapoint or let me down
i''m so addicted to you, your the only one
the only one for me.
you are so serious,
but you teach me.
you taught me, you give to me,
i love , i want you, i need you
my life is whole with you.
i hold you deep
i have you deep within me stay with me my love
hold on to me.
i''m whole
i''m whole
i''m so whole with you
stay with me
your in my soul
you are the one for me
never leave me, my love
i want you
i want you with me
you are the one to fulfill me
you are the for me
love me, love you




Copyright © rie ... [ 2005-10-11 09:28:14]
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Re: FEELING WHOLE (User Rating: 1 )
by chickrockerbaby on Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 09:49:27 AM AEST
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This could also be in the love poetry section but is also happy. It's like a double section-er. Haha, I liked it but personally I would of used diffeerent words (like synonms of the ones you used) instead of using the regular everyday ones. It's quite allright though and it was a truly good read.


Re: FEELING WHOLE (User Rating: 1 )
by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 10:47:05 AM AEST
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A very sweet poem to that special someone.
Nicely done.
Jeff




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