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*~Another Day~*
Contributed by
ruthie1983
on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 12:29:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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I feel all alone in my bedroom,
The feeling is scary,
Not a single word coming from anyone,
My stomach grumbling deep within,
I hear nothing but my own heart beat,
My respiration increasing with every breath,
I miss the friendship I had a while back,
They all vanish ignoring my words,
I wonder if that’s what was meant to be?
Was it just a moment of friendship?
Just when I thought it will last forever,
The friendship ended with no word spoken,
Should I say it is the past?
Should I move on?
The other friend does not care,
It seems like it is the end for both of us?
Why can I not get that concept?
The empty room makes it even worse,
All alone remembering the past,
Waiting for what tomorrow brings.
Copyright ©
ruthie1983
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2005-10-11 00:29:37] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: *~Another Day~*
(User Rating: 1 ) by Archie on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 01:20:40 AM AEST (User
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I have been there. I am glad to say though that I learned my lesson and have good friends that i truly care about. |
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Re: *~Another Day~*
(User Rating: 1 ) by jheng on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 10:35:21 AM AEST (User
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great poem, i felt the same way when my new friend & i recently had some sort of disagreement |
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