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Never to leave my Heart
Contributed by
LostinLife
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Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 12:15:25 AM in AEST
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I remember the day I said I loved you
And you said you loved me
But you lied
You deceived me
Pain was all you brought
Happiness was all you wasted
I let you in my heart
You tore it apart
The day you abandoned me
My heart bleeds
As I think of you
You'll never leave me
You'll always be there
I won't ever forget you
Will you forget me
"I'm a voice lost
A vague image in your mind
A whisper gone unheard"
Is what you once wrote to me
Do you remember that
I do
I remember the tears it brought to me
The pain that tore through my heart
Its been so long
Still I love you
Even though you don't feel the same
I hope one day
You'll realize what you gave away....
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Re: Never to leave my Heart
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by ruthie1983 on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 12:34:42 AM AEST
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| I hope one time or day he will realize wht he gave away too. Good write cuz it is filled with emotions. Good job! |
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Re: Never to leave my Heart
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by justkevi on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 01:40:03 AM AEST
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| Good sentiment. It could be expressed better, but I love the conclusion. Hold out for someone who will return your feelings. |
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Re: Never to leave my Heart
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by MetalheadSD on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 01:56:09 AM AEST
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| Well done. I enjoyed this. |
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Re: Never to leave my Heart
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by jheng on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 10:37:12 AM AEST
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| great poem, dont worry its his lost not yours ... |
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Re: Never to leave my Heart
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by In_a_while on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 03:04:33 PM AEST
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very heartfelt.... and writing is the best therapy.
I'm sure that day will come when that person
will realize what they gave away...
keep writing! |
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