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Array ( [sid] => 107461 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Seasons [time] => 2005-10-10 16:45:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => The springtime winds across the sky
Carry the dove far and high
Passing by contently - then nevermore
Into the shadow of heavens door

And swiftly does the butterfly sprint
From leaf to leaf - if but for a stint
Gracing each with its beauty pure
Then quick to flee - so demure

Gentle is the autumn breeze
Changing all with the greatest ease
Both trees and flowers lay to rest
And begin their slumber without protest

While winter's flaking blanket falls
The bitter cold abruptly calls
Morning frost quickly ensues
And springtime once again's in cue

These seasons change without fail
And each in turn tells its tale
Of life unique and scenic brilliance
Each to sustain nature's balance [comments] => 9 [counter] => 332 [topic] => 27 [informant] => wizard [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 19 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => NaturePoetry )

Seasons

Contributed by wizard on Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 04:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic: NaturePoetry

The springtime winds across the sky
Carry the dove far and high
Passing by contently - then nevermore
Into the shadow of heavens door

And swiftly does the butterfly sprint
From leaf to leaf - if but for a stint
Gracing each with its beauty pure
Then quick to flee - so demure

Gentle is the autumn breeze
Changing all with the greatest ease
Both trees and flowers lay to rest
And begin their slumber without protest

While winter's flaking blanket falls
The bitter cold abruptly calls
Morning frost quickly ensues
And springtime once again's in cue

These seasons change without fail
And each in turn tells its tale
Of life unique and scenic brilliance
Each to sustain nature's balance

Copyright © wizard ... [ 2005-10-10 16:45:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Seasons (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 04:50:57 PM AEST
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I like this a lot. You have a great writing style. Your imagery is grand.

Re: Seasons (User Rating: 1 )
by fielding88 on Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 05:51:31 PM AEST
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So vividly written, with a style that I quite enjoyed. I love your attention to rhyme and metering, and the structure was handled so well. Nicely done!

Re: Seasons (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 05:53:09 PM AEST
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Very Vivid, thoughts, and nice images...........Always a nice pleasure, to read everything you always, pen.! Loved it. Thanks for sharing..........

Brew~

Re: Seasons (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 06:15:24 PM AEST
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Another brilliant piece of poetry from you. A truly talented poet who has such flare with a pen. I loved the images you cast into your readers head. Breath taking and beautiful.
Well done.
*hugs*
Sue

Re: Seasons (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 07:42:18 PM AEST
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Well done, Wiz... Great imagery!!
Jenni

Re: Seasons (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 10:11:45 PM AEST
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Nice! I read that first stanza and thought, wow, love the imagery, I have to remember to mention that!
Then I read the next stanza, and the next, and it just became more vivid with each line, let alone stanza! Very poetic : )
This is a great poem, and as always, your flow is smooth as silk! Love the ending too.

Scorp.

Re: Seasons (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 02:28:20 AM AEST
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Well written bro..
capitalization of Heaven was a miss..
but other than that..
I liked it a lot!!!

B

Re: Seasons (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 17th February 2006 @ 08:06:31 PM AEST
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Wow ! I love this entirely!!
I have always been of the opinion that I should never
[nor could I ever] live anywhere that I would not be free
to enjoy the changing seasons. And you have captured
each one's beauty exquisitely.
[But I like the one about autumn the best --- go figure!]

Tranquil and serene, dear poet
~Breezy

Re: Seasons (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 02:33:31 PM AEST
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yes every season is definately a story in itself.. nature .... blessed nature... beauty wrapped in beauty in us and around us.. rl

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