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That a boy on the other side of the world from me
Heard what I told her when the last two were
Just straight gin
These dreams won’t stop

Heart climbs up to my throat
When it’s you
shaking too bad
To sing
When it’s you standing on my doorstep

I refuse to believe anyone will ever
Love me the way you do
Like I’m what beauty has come to mean
“perfect”
It was you sitting in the back of the car
When the lights caught my eyes
And coaxed a sigh
Don’t ever let me go

These moments of light won’t mean a thing
If it’s not your arms wrapped around me
So deny whatever you have to
Don’t let me let you go
Because sometimes I’m stupid
And sometimes I’m wrong
But this won’t mean anything
If it’s not you who’s watching
Me cross the room
Like the dress isn’t even there

Don’t ever let me believe
Even for a second
That I don’t love you…
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When It's You

Contributed by Dri on Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 03:06:34 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

These words travel farther than I would have had them
That a boy on the other side of the world from me
Heard what I told her when the last two were
Just straight gin
These dreams won’t stop

Heart climbs up to my throat
When it’s you
shaking too bad
To sing
When it’s you standing on my doorstep

I refuse to believe anyone will ever
Love me the way you do
Like I’m what beauty has come to mean
“perfect”
It was you sitting in the back of the car
When the lights caught my eyes
And coaxed a sigh
Don’t ever let me go

These moments of light won’t mean a thing
If it’s not your arms wrapped around me
So deny whatever you have to
Don’t let me let you go
Because sometimes I’m stupid
And sometimes I’m wrong
But this won’t mean anything
If it’s not you who’s watching
Me cross the room
Like the dress isn’t even there

Don’t ever let me believe
Even for a second
That I don’t love you…

Copyright Â© Dri ... [ 2005-10-10 15:06:34]
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Re: When It's You (User Rating: 1 )
by lostrelic on Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 04:09:20 PM AEST
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very lovely poem and a great meaning with a nice flow thank you
r.m.wilder

Re: When It's You (User Rating: 1 )
by Kirby on Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 07:23:02 PM AEST
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great poem, some words are just so hard to say and u did suck a great job.

Love::::Kirby

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