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Array ( [sid] => 107427 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Bruised but not beaten [time] => 2005-10-10 05:24:36 [hometext] => This is to anyone who has tried to put me down [bodytext] => You could put me down
And turn my hopeful smile into an unhappy frown
But you couldn't keep me down for long
Because my mind, and my will are still strong

You could call me all the names under the sun
But you can't stop me having my share of the fun

You could run me into the ground
But always remember what comes around goes around

You could shoot a hole through my heart
But I won't let myself fall apart

You could say I'm not that smart
Or that I can't play the part

But since I have found my art
I have started to belive in myself
And my health has improved
Because I have moved on
And this is because now I've realized all along
That the things you used to say about me were wrong. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 212 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Redhotchilichic [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Bruised but not beaten

Contributed by Redhotchilichic on Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 05:24:36 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

You could put me down
And turn my hopeful smile into an unhappy frown
But you couldn't keep me down for long
Because my mind, and my will are still strong

You could call me all the names under the sun
But you can't stop me having my share of the fun

You could run me into the ground
But always remember what comes around goes around

You could shoot a hole through my heart
But I won't let myself fall apart

You could say I'm not that smart
Or that I can't play the part

But since I have found my art
I have started to belive in myself
And my health has improved
Because I have moved on
And this is because now I've realized all along
That the things you used to say about me were wrong.

Copyright © Redhotchilichic ... [ 2005-10-10 05:24:36]
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Re: Bruised but not beaten (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 06:54:49 AM AEST
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Very strong, powerfull, positive attitude.
No onehas the right to put any one but still may do.
luv, huggs,
emy

Re: Bruised but not beaten (User Rating: 1 )
by FairyFireFly on Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 05:22:40 PM AEST
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WOw very nice i like it alot i can really relate to it. I had been treated pretty ugly all through school and now im doing great. Awsome thanks for shareing.

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