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Array ( [sid] => 107407 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I HOPE YOU ARE HAPPY [time] => 2005-10-09 18:41:23 [hometext] => people think differently of me...now i told people wat i think of myself. please show your support and comment [bodytext] => I hoPe You''re Happy
I broke down,
Are you happy?
Are you pleased?
Because I know, you’re no different
You don’t care about my difficulties
I don’t need you feeling bad for me
I don’t need your shoulder either
But don’t lie to me, like I do to my mother

Things inside me are boiling up
They need to be changed
But every day I want to be a better person
For who, not for me
I always thought I was tough, and open-minded
But that was just me describing you
Always trying to help people
When again I’m the one needing it too

Getting nightmares about my future
Scared to sleep or walk down the street
I always looked different at life, but now I’m scared to dream
Scared to cry, I really am, the tears just get dried up inside


I actually feel at times like I’m on the right track
I’m where I’m supposed to be
But then someone makes it extremely clear that I’m still confused
Still don’t recognize me and the part that’s just the wanna be

The moment I take another step
The feeling I get when I open a new door
Is a smile on my face that you won’t see for a while anymore

Its funny how things can change over a long time
Yet it seems so quick
I know not too long ago, I was not worrying about my lies or tricks
Yet again I know I was uptight, since my lies became my past

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 325 [topic] => 48 [informant] => LongingFor [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
I HOPE YOU ARE HAPPY

Contributed by LongingFor on Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 06:41:23 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



I hoPe You''re Happy
I broke down,
Are you happy?
Are you pleased?
Because I know, you’re no different
You don’t care about my difficulties
I don’t need you feeling bad for me
I don’t need your shoulder either
But don’t lie to me, like I do to my mother

Things inside me are boiling up
They need to be changed
But every day I want to be a better person
For who, not for me
I always thought I was tough, and open-minded
But that was just me describing you
Always trying to help people
When again I’m the one needing it too

Getting nightmares about my future
Scared to sleep or walk down the street
I always looked different at life, but now I’m scared to dream
Scared to cry, I really am, the tears just get dried up inside


I actually feel at times like I’m on the right track
I’m where I’m supposed to be
But then someone makes it extremely clear that I’m still confused
Still don’t recognize me and the part that’s just the wanna be

The moment I take another step
The feeling I get when I open a new door
Is a smile on my face that you won’t see for a while anymore

Its funny how things can change over a long time
Yet it seems so quick
I know not too long ago, I was not worrying about my lies or tricks
Yet again I know I was uptight, since my lies became my past





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Re: I HOPE YOU ARE HAPPY (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 06:53:06 PM AEST
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you sound like a lost puppy,
like your lost in some bizzare
computer game, and honestly
its hard to read. thats just my
opinion, other people dont agree
and thats fine.


Re: I HOPE YOU ARE HAPPY (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 06:59:19 PM AEST
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others always seem to think they know us best when most times they dont have a clue. DOnt try so hard to work through things they have a way of working out themselves. Nicely expressed emotional write

Michelle


Re: I HOPE YOU ARE HAPPY (User Rating: 1 )
by poet_of_anger on Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 09:36:58 PM AEST
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This is very very good. Wonderful writing!




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