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The grass from gullible lime.
It was the air that you hugged,
A whisper of a lowly chime.

In a forest of breathing light,
the dirt oozes a brilliant scent.
Leafy guardians loom above,
Where all our time was spent.

So this is how it feels to be alone,
With a heart full of sorrow.
How will the sun shine,
Without you tomorrow.

I see your name in the clouds,
And your face in the pond.
When the sun sets in flames,
My longing for you just dawned.

I want to hold you once again,
Look into your blue eyes.
As a watery rose in my hand,
Slowly withers away and dies.

On a pale spring morning,
The pain hasn’t died away.
The sky is blooming red,
My life bleeds another day.

Can I keep this pain inside,
A silent ghost of misery.
Will the guilt wash away,
Or can I ever say I’m sorry. [comments] => 7 [counter] => 281 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Mild_Tempest [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

The Silence Inside

Contributed by Mild_Tempest on Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 04:42:15 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Skies was made from wine,
The grass from gullible lime.
It was the air that you hugged,
A whisper of a lowly chime.

In a forest of breathing light,
the dirt oozes a brilliant scent.
Leafy guardians loom above,
Where all our time was spent.

So this is how it feels to be alone,
With a heart full of sorrow.
How will the sun shine,
Without you tomorrow.

I see your name in the clouds,
And your face in the pond.
When the sun sets in flames,
My longing for you just dawned.

I want to hold you once again,
Look into your blue eyes.
As a watery rose in my hand,
Slowly withers away and dies.

On a pale spring morning,
The pain hasn’t died away.
The sky is blooming red,
My life bleeds another day.

Can I keep this pain inside,
A silent ghost of misery.
Will the guilt wash away,
Or can I ever say I’m sorry.

Copyright Â© Mild_Tempest ... [ 2005-10-09 16:42:15]
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Re: The Silence Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by xPixiexDustx on Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 04:55:53 PM AEST
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I love the emotion in this. I dont think you need to change anything, its beautiful the way it is. =) Well done.

Re: The Silence Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by O7NeVeS on Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 06:59:42 PM AEST
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definitely a lot of emotion. I enjoyed reading this. I wasn't too crazy bout the beginning but loved the middle to the end! Great job. TD

Re: The Silence Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 10:24:32 PM AEST
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how sad this is and yet beautifuly written a lot of stired emotion brought me 2 tears inside
very well done and most effective.

Ben

Re: The Silence Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by ArsenicMyst on Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 03:25:36 PM AEST
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*
i just love it

and, the ease of your writing skill

Arsenic`·.¸·:·

Re: The Silence Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by ChibiMiroku on Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 09:53:13 PM AEST
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Aww...that's sad. But a good poem! xD

Hope it gets better......=[

Re: The Silence Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 26th October 2005 @ 06:07:31 PM AEST
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*sigh*

aw, a heartfelt and sorrow-filled piece,
wonderfully expressed.

"How will the sun shine,
Without you tomorrow."
Indeed!

Beautiful write, Will.

~Breezy

Re: The Silence Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by Elisabeth on Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 11:10:52 PM AEST
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I thought this was really good, and I also agree with O7NeVeS. Thanks for sharing!

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