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Array ( [sid] => 107347 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I'll Wait [time] => 2005-10-08 20:13:47 [hometext] => Of all times to mess up, I do it now...Now that he's on the other side of the world. [bodytext] => Have I lost you? Are you gone?
I hope not, what about our bond?
I thought it was tight, I guess I was wrong
Maybe a few months was just too long
That can't be right, that's not the reason
I think I was distracted, by the change in season
I'm so sorry, I take it all back
I'll wait for you to come home, and that's a fact
I need you to call me, I need you to write
I just want to smile, each and every night
Without any contact, from you I'm so lost
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I'll Wait

Contributed by o7neves on Saturday, 8th October 2005 @ 08:13:47 PM in AEST
Topic: ApologyPoetry

Have I lost you? Are you gone?
I hope not, what about our bond?
I thought it was tight, I guess I was wrong
Maybe a few months was just too long
That can't be right, that's not the reason
I think I was distracted, by the change in season
I'm so sorry, I take it all back
I'll wait for you to come home, and that's a fact
I need you to call me, I need you to write
I just want to smile, each and every night
Without any contact, from you I'm so lost
I want to be with you, no matter the cost

Copyright © o7neves ... [ 2005-10-08 20:13:47]
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Re: I'll Wait (User Rating: 1 )
by coolbreeze17 on Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 02:40:10 AM AEST
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i hope everything works out

Re: I'll Wait (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 03:51:18 AM AEST
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It sounds like love alright. I hope he forgives you. Good job of expressing your emotions in this write. Keep it up!

Scorp.

Re: I'll Wait (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 09:35:59 AM AEST
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That was very nice. I can feel the love, devotion, & emotion. Very good write.

Take care,

Tim
:)

Re: I'll Wait (User Rating: 1 )
by SkC_cutie on Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 12:53:37 PM AEST
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The beginning makes it sound as if it is about cheating but knowing a mistake was made and wanting to be forgiven and taken back.

Re: I'll Wait (User Rating: 1 )
by CurtisC on Monday, 28th November 2005 @ 10:21:36 PM AEST
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i've realized something during the last few weeks....we shouldn't have to wait for love, if it's actually true love it should always be there. No waiting, no games, no uneasiness, nothing, just two people completely intertwined together no matter what the circumstances, struggles, or etc.....if something is stopping it than it isn't true...wonderful write, with great intent :)

curtis

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