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Array ( [sid] => 107332 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => She said ~ He said [time] => 2005-10-08 15:12:53 [hometext] => There are layers here ... so many, that perhap even I yet fail to see them all. It can be taken so many ways, perhaps it was thus intended [bodytext] => <+>

She said “You don’t know me”
He said “I’m not afraid to try”
She said “You can’t hold me”
He said “Can you tell me why?”
She said “You look to me
Like you might leave”
He said “Babe, looks
Sometimes deceive.
Gimme a chance and
You might be surprised”
He took her hand and fell Into her life She said “But you promised”
He said “I did no such thing”
She showed him her finger He said “I don’t see no ring”
She said “I knew
From the very start
You’d be the next
To break my heart.”
He said “I never meant to
Cause you any pain”
He closed the door and fell Into the rain Leaving was the hardest thing He’d ever had to do He hoped someday She could say She understood the truth It’s not easy being So in love With someone They can't rise above The image you have Painted in your head ( At least that’s what he said )

He said “You don’t know me”
She said “I’m not afraid to try ...”

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[comments] => 6 [counter] => 300 [topic] => 25 [informant] => Nazmythian [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 47 [ratings] => 16 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )

She said ~ He said

Contributed by Nazmythian on Saturday, 8th October 2005 @ 03:12:53 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

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She said “You don’t know me”
He said “I’m not afraid to try”
She said “You can’t hold me”
He said “Can you tell me why?”
She said “You look to me
Like you might leave”
He said “Babe, looks
Sometimes deceive.
Gimme a chance and
You might be surprised”
He took her hand and fell Into her life She said “But you promised”
He said “I did no such thing”
She showed him her finger He said “I don’t see no ring”
She said “I knew
From the very start
You’d be the next
To break my heart.”
He said “I never meant to
Cause you any pain”
He closed the door and fell Into the rain Leaving was the hardest thing He’d ever had to do He hoped someday She could say She understood the truth It’s not easy being So in love With someone They can't rise above The image you have Painted in your head ( At least that’s what he said )

He said “You don’t know me”
She said “I’m not afraid to try ...”

<+>

Copyright Â© Nazmythian ... [ 2005-10-08 15:12:53]
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Re: She said ~ He said (User Rating: 1 )
by xofireangel27 on Saturday, 8th October 2005 @ 03:32:49 PM AEST
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very good write. this descibes so much of my life, thanks for posting

-Kelly-

Re: She said ~ He said (User Rating: 1 )
by remote on Saturday, 8th October 2005 @ 04:07:51 PM AEST
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Most people are afraid to know themselves and so hardly know themselves, expecting to know someone else is a bit too much to ask. I guess they may be excused.

Re: She said ~ He said (User Rating: 1 )
by fielding88 on Saturday, 8th October 2005 @ 08:03:19 PM AEST
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I'm so glad I read this. You put into words something I've wanted to write for the past month or so, and still have yet to properly think of a way to do it. You handled the subject matter so well here, and this is something you should be proud to have written.

*Hopes self has seen a sufficient amount of layers in this one, which self thinks he has*

Excellent write

Re: She said ~ He said (User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on Saturday, 8th October 2005 @ 09:04:28 PM AEST
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the layers are written so cleverly that reading this makes one wonder....
nice work here....

coni

Re: She said ~ He said (User Rating: 1 )
by Willofree on Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 04:05:03 PM AEST
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Naz,

A very creative write; and as complicated as relationships are is reflected in the complexities of this poem. While there are many layers, there does appear to be an overall theme. That theme, I think, relates to how well do people really know each other. So we go by our perceptions of reality which may not be accurate - regarding the significant other or of ourselves. Yes, t he whole issue of transparency/openness.

Well done, my friend
Will/Terry

Re: She said ~ He said (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 12:49:32 AM AEST
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This is good. It shows me what to avoid when i get involved in a relationship. Great write.

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