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suicide is the only way to deal with
this life i live
my suicide is the best,is the worst,it just is
i will stop all the hate all the fighting
my life is just not worth living
theres no heaven no hell or me or you
so what will my suicide do it will stop everything,no wait
it will do nothing
why? because no one sees me
or hears me i talk they listen but its not me
myself no one understands so my suicide is the one
no one will remember
so should i do it ?yes to end the pain the hate the hurt and fear
to stop it so it dont work for all this that i am feeling
is nothing at all because no one is here or there
and no one cares for me i am invisable
my self is not here
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suicide

Contributed by crazy on Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 08:15:53 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

my suicideis one everone will remember
suicide is the only way to deal with
this life i live
my suicide is the best,is the worst,it just is
i will stop all the hate all the fighting
my life is just not worth living
theres no heaven no hell or me or you
so what will my suicide do it will stop everything,no wait
it will do nothing
why? because no one sees me
or hears me i talk they listen but its not me
myself no one understands so my suicide is the one
no one will remember
so should i do it ?yes to end the pain the hate the hurt and fear
to stop it so it dont work for all this that i am feeling
is nothing at all because no one is here or there
and no one cares for me i am invisable
my self is not here
my suicide will be the one everybody remembers

Copyright © crazy ... [ 2005-10-07 20:15:53]
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Re: suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by crazy on Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 08:28:20 PM AEST
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i feel the same way i cant stand being me i hate my self

Re: suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by Elizabeth_Dandy on Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 08:53:56 PM AEST
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Love yourself!
You are infinitely precious.
"Love your neighbor as you love yourself."
Nobody can love his neighbor without loving him/herself first..
This is God's word, - the wellspring of life and love.
Call on HIM!
He will hear and teach you how precious life is.
Blessings
Elizabeth

Re: suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by guiltycircles on Saturday, 8th October 2005 @ 03:52:11 AM AEST
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this poem really captures the rapid, illogical, constant thoughts that go through one's mind when they want to die...i know this feeling and you have really captured the confusion, well done...

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