Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!
Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com    Poems On Site: 198,500+   Comments On Poems: 427,000+   Forum Posts: 105,000+
Custom Search
  Welcome ! Home  ·  FAQ  ·  Topics  ·  Web Links  ·  Your Account  ·  Submit Poetry  ·  Top 30  ·  OldSite Link 29-May 15:54:43 AEST  
  Menu
  Home
· Micks Shop
· Our eBay Store· Error Submit
 Poetry
· Submit Poetry
· Least Read Poems
· Topics
· Members Listing
· Old Site Post 2001
· Old Site Pre 2001
· Poetry Archive
· Public Domain Poetry
 Stories
· Stories (NEW ! )
· Submit Story
· Story Topics
· Stories Archive
· Story Search
  Community
· Our Poetry Forums
· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

  Site Help
· FAQ
· Feedback

  Members Areas
· Your Account
· Members Journals
· Premium Sign-Up
  Premium Section
· Special Section
· Premium Poems
· Premium Submit
· Premium Search
· Premium Top
· Premium Archive
· Premium Topics
 Fun & Games

· Jokes
· Bubble Puzzle
· ConnectN
· Cross Word
· Cross Word Easy
· Drag Puzzle
· Word Hunt
 Reference
· Dictionary
· Dictionary (Rhyming)
· Site Updates
· Content
· Special Content
 Search
· Search
· Web Links
· All Links
 Top
· Top 30
  Help This Site
· Donations
 Others
· Recipes
· Moderators
Our Other Sites
· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

  Social

Array ( [sid] => 107269 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Mommy dearest cut off my hand [time] => 2005-10-07 13:02:42 [hometext] => || To the loving mother who beats the **** out of their child just to feel superior || [bodytext] => Talking back
beat me down
All alone
in your gown
Going down
down again
Take me back
to the end

I want to go
Get off my mind
I want to show
I don't have time
I don't know
You don't care
All alone
Piggy fair


Wake up to you're loving damnation
All wrapped up with no where to go
Wake me up to my sanity salvation
Tell me what you want to know


Looking back
Hour glass
Time is bleak
You're so weak
With a cause
Or your claws
I don't mind
I have some time

Chasing me
I'm willing
Never need
the running scene
It's what you guess
beat to impress
I don't care
Your plastic hair


Put me, put me, put me in your chair
kill me, kill me, kill me on your stage
Lull me, lull me, lull me, with your stare
I don't want the time ...


[comments] => 5 [counter] => 180 [topic] => 55 [informant] => Desolated_Denial [notes] => Authors note edited due to the use of a banned word. Please do not try to fool the world filters. - Moderator_16 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )
Mommy dearest cut off my hand

Contributed by Desolated_Denial on Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 01:02:42 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems



Talking back
beat me down
All alone
in your gown
Going down
down again
Take me back
to the end

I want to go
Get off my mind
I want to show
I don't have time
I don't know
You don't care
All alone
Piggy fair


Wake up to you're loving damnation
All wrapped up with no where to go
Wake me up to my sanity salvation
Tell me what you want to know


Looking back
Hour glass
Time is bleak
You're so weak
With a cause
Or your claws
I don't mind
I have some time

Chasing me
I'm willing
Never need
the running scene
It's what you guess
beat to impress
I don't care
Your plastic hair


Put me, put me, put me in your chair
kill me, kill me, kill me on your stage
Lull me, lull me, lull me, with your stare
I don't want the time ...






Copyright © Desolated_Denial ... [ 2005-10-07 13:02:42]
(Date/Time posted on site)





Advertisments:






Previous Posted Poem         | |         Next Posted Poem


 
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.
Re: Mommy dearest cut off my hand (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 04:32:47 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)


Are you just choosing words because they rhyme? because your not making any sense boyo


Re: Mommy dearest cut off my hand (User Rating: 1 )
by judasman on Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 04:51:08 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
you don't care
all alone
piggy fair

cool!

good write a bit obscure but nevertheless good


Re: Mommy dearest cut off my hand (User Rating: 1 )
by Desolated_Denial on Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 06:07:43 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Thank you for your constructive critizism... and no, i'm not choosing them because they rhyme ... look past face value. If you look past superficial rhymes, then you would see the meaning.

Thank you for your comments, though. I truly am grateful.


Re: Mommy dearest cut off my hand (User Rating: 1 )
by grim6669 on Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 12:14:47 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
i really like this one.....i love the way you write and the words you choose.....don't mind what the others say about the words they say you're making up....even if you are just making them up, i still love your poetry.
keep up the good work.
grim6669
amber


Re: Mommy dearest cut off my hand (User Rating: 1 )
by Minus_Blindfold on Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 07:33:13 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Go Lili, go Lili, go, go, go Lili....




While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com