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Array ( [sid] => 10726 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Muted Passion [time] => 2003-01-19 13:20:00 [hometext] => well this is really not romantic or whatever, but i know what u think. ya i do have the guts to tell my so-called-secret life. [bodytext] => There were two guys and one was opposite

to the other. the other simple and plain, they

found time for one another they would be

friends for a while untill the end came. The

opposite one wanted to love him for who he

was, the simple one couldn't. The opposite

tried everything. I can see a way love for one

person can tear them apart, a crime and a

price to pay for. An unintentional affair

became their undoing and now the opposite

one is broken, and the simple one is a token.

An unspoken good-bye speaks volumes,

and one last gaze into the simple ones eyes

can be a heartbreaker. Now I can be free

for I was the opposite and I love him.
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Muted Passion

Contributed by darkkai on Sunday, 19th January 2003 @ 01:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

There were two guys and one was opposite

to the other. the other simple and plain, they

found time for one another they would be

friends for a while untill the end came. The

opposite one wanted to love him for who he

was, the simple one couldn't. The opposite

tried everything. I can see a way love for one

person can tear them apart, a crime and a

price to pay for. An unintentional affair

became their undoing and now the opposite

one is broken, and the simple one is a token.

An unspoken good-bye speaks volumes,

and one last gaze into the simple ones eyes

can be a heartbreaker. Now I can be free

for I was the opposite and I love him.

Copyright © darkkai ... [ 2003-01-19 13:20:00]
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Re: Muted Passion (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Sunday, 19th January 2003 @ 04:16:35 PM AEST
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This is nice... love is what matters whether it be heterosexual or not is not a choice you should be condemned for... Good write

Re: Muted Passion (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 02:59:14 AM AEST
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You certainly do have the guts dear to tell just how you feel and that's exactly as you should do.....let your heart write out your love ....it's absolutely beautiful....and cast away those that judge you because you are unique and your soul is beauitiful my dear friend.....i love this one....i'll be looking for more...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.

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