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Array ( [sid] => 107235 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Best Friends In The End [time] => 2005-10-07 01:51:39 [hometext] => I Just like to write about different things, when I am in different moods. I Know my poems aren't as good as other's, but I am new to this so what can I say? Enjoy if you wish. [bodytext] => I never knew the end would come so soon
everything seemed alright
until that afternoon
I was there for you until that night
I had to go home
and you said you'd be fine
I left you all alone
now I wish I'd had more time
It should've never ended like this
Now I'm sittin here by your grave
Wondering where my heart is
I wish that you wouldn't have touched that blade
I push my hands into the dirt
leave them there and start to cry
I never imagined how bad this would hurt
Why did you have to die?
I wipe my tears with dirty hands
take the necklace out of my pocket
push myself up and make myself stand
Took one last look at the locket
It was a picture of you and me
Under the picture it said "best friends"
I put it on your grave, thats where it should be
We will always be together even though it is the end [comments] => 3 [counter] => 288 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Sae [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Best Friends In The End

Contributed by Sae on Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 01:51:39 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



I never knew the end would come so soon
everything seemed alright
until that afternoon
I was there for you until that night
I had to go home
and you said you'd be fine
I left you all alone
now I wish I'd had more time
It should've never ended like this
Now I'm sittin here by your grave
Wondering where my heart is
I wish that you wouldn't have touched that blade
I push my hands into the dirt
leave them there and start to cry
I never imagined how bad this would hurt
Why did you have to die?
I wipe my tears with dirty hands
take the necklace out of my pocket
push myself up and make myself stand
Took one last look at the locket
It was a picture of you and me
Under the picture it said "best friends"
I put it on your grave, thats where it should be
We will always be together even though it is the end




Copyright © Sae ... [ 2005-10-07 01:51:39]
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Re: Best Friends In The End (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 02:04:07 AM AEST
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I like this, your poem tells a great story even though sad I have to smile that you did not dwell in sadness but got up ( in your poem ) and moved on still holding that friendship dear.


Re: Best Friends In The End (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 09:46:44 AM AEST
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Your writes, are good. A nice dedication, for a friend, that held a special place within.! Keep memories, and it WILL always hold a special place.!


Brew~


Re: Best Friends In The End (User Rating: 1 )
by sidneyconrad23 on Tuesday, 9th November 2010 @ 05:16:26 AM AEST
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Nice really nice you do have a gift from God always use that.




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