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Array ( [sid] => 10722 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Save Me [time] => 2003-01-19 12:00:00 [hometext] => Just some poem I wrote in September *quite a lengthy poem* [bodytext] => You've gone away so far away
Who knows if you'll come another day
The waves will always crash against the sea
And you'll never know how lonesome I will be
Theres been to many days of being alone
The feeling of love may never be known
There have been many times where I have cried
Becuase you may never know that ways I've tried
The empty nights of blank moonlight
Fill the ways I tried to make it right
The calmest winds always pass me by
And stop for a moment to watch me sigh
It didn't turn out the way I'd thought
And theres been to my in life that i've fought
It isn't that I can't go on
I just need to always be strong
I know inside I can survive
For we must all go on with out lives
In moments of passing those greenest hills
The breezes still whisper, "I love you still."
I thought to you I was something more
But I guess I was just like the ones before
So whenever you told me I'll love you till I die
I never believed it to become a lie
At night I get jealous of the stars
Cause they can see you, wherever you are
I often long to hear you say
I will always love you, everyday
I don't know why you did this and often I ask why
Why you took my love and left it there to die
Outside the sun is breaking through
And I try my best to forget about you
But nobody told the truth to me
About love and how hurtful it can be
In my days of hard-filled sorrow
I search for the light that brings tomorrow
Save me before I slip away
Come back to me and this time stay
I'm alone, please don't leave me here
I may never love again and this I truely fear
My heart can't stand this anymore
And its aching to open its freedom door
Softly the kisses remember their name
But realize their meaning may never be the same
When you left I felt so strange
For I wasn't accustomed to this brand new change
Sleepless nights I'd always cry
I remembered the day that you said goodbye
The dreams I savoured went down the drain
And the nightmares would come, along with the pain
I thought you could tell that I loved you so
But you did not understand, therefore you did not know
My bitter tears are tired and have no place to hide
Trying not to burst out the trepidation that I hold inside
Templates of memoirs have been written in days
And they speak of the love they knew in many ways
Lonely whispers speak in the night
Countless dreams too tried to fight
The hope has begun to fade away
My once sunny skies have turned to gray
In struggling days I try to unwind
But then I realize I'm falling more behind
I always try to believe my dreams but how
Cause I can't settle my dreams right now
Of all that I have been through
My silence will always cry, "I miss you."
But now I shall never be the same
For when we met, my whole life changed
Never tell me that its too late
For I know i'll see you if I believe in our fate
I'll always be with you no matter where you are
In my saddened heart, I know you'll never be far
For you I shall be waiting, day after day
Hoping to see you and love you in many ways
Until my days of heartbreaking end
I'll still ask myself, where and when [comments] => 1 [counter] => 161 [topic] => 22 [informant] => SpreadYourWings [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Save Me

Contributed by SpreadYourWings on Sunday, 19th January 2003 @ 12:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



You've gone away so far away
Who knows if you'll come another day
The waves will always crash against the sea
And you'll never know how lonesome I will be
Theres been to many days of being alone
The feeling of love may never be known
There have been many times where I have cried
Becuase you may never know that ways I've tried
The empty nights of blank moonlight
Fill the ways I tried to make it right
The calmest winds always pass me by
And stop for a moment to watch me sigh
It didn't turn out the way I'd thought
And theres been to my in life that i've fought
It isn't that I can't go on
I just need to always be strong
I know inside I can survive
For we must all go on with out lives
In moments of passing those greenest hills
The breezes still whisper, "I love you still."
I thought to you I was something more
But I guess I was just like the ones before
So whenever you told me I'll love you till I die
I never believed it to become a lie
At night I get jealous of the stars
Cause they can see you, wherever you are
I often long to hear you say
I will always love you, everyday
I don't know why you did this and often I ask why
Why you took my love and left it there to die
Outside the sun is breaking through
And I try my best to forget about you
But nobody told the truth to me
About love and how hurtful it can be
In my days of hard-filled sorrow
I search for the light that brings tomorrow
Save me before I slip away
Come back to me and this time stay
I'm alone, please don't leave me here
I may never love again and this I truely fear
My heart can't stand this anymore
And its aching to open its freedom door
Softly the kisses remember their name
But realize their meaning may never be the same
When you left I felt so strange
For I wasn't accustomed to this brand new change
Sleepless nights I'd always cry
I remembered the day that you said goodbye
The dreams I savoured went down the drain
And the nightmares would come, along with the pain
I thought you could tell that I loved you so
But you did not understand, therefore you did not know
My bitter tears are tired and have no place to hide
Trying not to burst out the trepidation that I hold inside
Templates of memoirs have been written in days
And they speak of the love they knew in many ways
Lonely whispers speak in the night
Countless dreams too tried to fight
The hope has begun to fade away
My once sunny skies have turned to gray
In struggling days I try to unwind
But then I realize I'm falling more behind
I always try to believe my dreams but how
Cause I can't settle my dreams right now
Of all that I have been through
My silence will always cry, "I miss you."
But now I shall never be the same
For when we met, my whole life changed
Never tell me that its too late
For I know i'll see you if I believe in our fate
I'll always be with you no matter where you are
In my saddened heart, I know you'll never be far
For you I shall be waiting, day after day
Hoping to see you and love you in many ways
Until my days of heartbreaking end
I'll still ask myself, where and when




Copyright © SpreadYourWings ... [ 2003-01-19 12:00:00]
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Re: Save Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Fiona on Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 04:21:14 PM AEST
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Wow, don't worry about the length hun, it was a great poem! I think we all know what it feels like to love someone so much and then lose them. I can't wait to read your other poems! Fiona




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