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[aid] => mick
[title] => The Mistake
[time] => 2005-10-06 06:34:21
[hometext] => Well this is my poem bout a chick no one i know but yeh hope u like it.....and give us some good feedback k cheers
[bodytext] => She runs around the corner Her heart pumping in her chest She pants louder Her thoughts are a mess Tears burn her face As they run down her cheek Pain haunts her body It dosnt want to leave She spots the ocean Its just up ahead She increases her pace She can hear what they said She's not good enough She's a mistake They don't want her anymore They wish she was dead She's reached the shore now She strips off her clothes For the last time she's breathing For the last time she's cold She plunges into the water And swims into the depths The icey water surrounds her She can almost smell her death She takes her last breath And dives below Remembering all the good times Remembering the bad She wonders if its worth it She realises its too late The water has sealed her Her life has taken her last step By Hannah [comments] => 3 [counter] => 267 [topic] => 36 [informant] => shattered_glass [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
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