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Array ( [sid] => 107133 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Yours [time] => 2005-10-05 14:58:45 [hometext] => [bodytext] => If I were the sky
I would give you the sun
to warm you and light your life
the way you light mine.

If I were the earth
I would give you my greens
to feed and nourish you
sustain you as you sustain me.

If I were the heavens
I would give you eternity
to bathe you in my paradise
the way you are my rapture.

But I am not the sky
I have no stars to give.

I am not the earth
I have no pastures to offer.

And I am not the heavens
I cannot promise unending ecstasy.

But I am yours.

I have arms to hold you in
lips to kiss you with
eyes to lose yourself in
and a heart to love you with.

I promise you this love
until the sky falls
the earth crumbles
and the heavens fade. [comments] => 7 [counter] => 343 [topic] => 2 [informant] => miss_jules [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Yours

Contributed by miss_jules on Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 02:58:45 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

If I were the sky
I would give you the sun
to warm you and light your life
the way you light mine.

If I were the earth
I would give you my greens
to feed and nourish you
sustain you as you sustain me.

If I were the heavens
I would give you eternity
to bathe you in my paradise
the way you are my rapture.

But I am not the sky
I have no stars to give.

I am not the earth
I have no pastures to offer.

And I am not the heavens
I cannot promise unending ecstasy.

But I am yours.

I have arms to hold you in
lips to kiss you with
eyes to lose yourself in
and a heart to love you with.

I promise you this love
until the sky falls
the earth crumbles
and the heavens fade.

Copyright © miss_jules ... [ 2005-10-05 14:58:45]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Yours (User Rating: 1 )
by xofireangel27 on Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 03:50:31 PM AEST
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very good, very pictoral, keep up the great work.

-Kelly-

Re: Yours (User Rating: 1 )
by lostrelic on Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 04:05:21 PM AEST
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if i was a emontional man i would really enjoy this just kidding very lovely write
r.m.wilder

Re: Yours (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetestsin101 on Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 05:15:14 PM AEST
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aww!!!!!! thats really sweet, and really good. 2 thumbs up. i would give u more, but thats all i hav. lol. keep it up.

~*~LEXI~*~

Re: Yours (User Rating: 1 )
by mccscratch on Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 08:23:08 PM AEST
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this is fantastic...

Re: Yours (User Rating: 1 )
by Dreamchaser on Thursday, 6th October 2005 @ 03:34:09 AM AEST
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Lovely poem . Great write.

Re: Yours (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 07:34:07 AM AEST
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As a new member, you are coming in with great style. This was a beautiful poem, expressing love in an amazing way. I bow.
Take care.
David

Re: Yours (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterflygirl40 on Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 01:23:43 AM AEST
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great write on this poem ..

welcome to ypdc..

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