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Array ( [sid] => 107113 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => U WRITE, (RIGHT) [time] => 2005-10-05 01:24:22 [hometext] => Anutthha rant (same person) [bodytext] =>

Star

Dance

SultryRose's Signatures

Uh huh, hum
Know somthin U write
Yeah do luv my docta
'cause he keeps my numbbas straite.
Hard 4 me 2 concentrate.
He even figures which
pills 2 take.

yeah, uh hummmn
u so write
My health his delite.
In luv now
that's a hole nuttha thang.
Maybe hon U could check
it out sometime
He do a BODIES WRITE
so I can sleep
1 mo nite.

Shush this ain't spostta rym
or be spelled jus write.
Thanks 2 my doctta
Can pick up this pen
see sunsets as they ends.
Yeah, my doctta
He sho do me write.

Someone very tipsie on the phone, told me he thought I was in-luv-with my doctta.
Now that I've thought of it da whipie snapper was write. [comments] => 11 [counter] => 362 [topic] => 63 [informant] => emystar [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => hbadday )

U WRITE, (RIGHT)

Contributed by emystar on Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 01:24:22 AM in AEST
Topic: hbadday

Star

Dance

SultryRose's Signatures

Uh huh, hum
Know somthin U write
Yeah do luv my docta
'cause he keeps my numbbas straite.
Hard 4 me 2 concentrate.
He even figures which
pills 2 take.

yeah, uh hummmn
u so write
My health his delite.
In luv now
that's a hole nuttha thang.
Maybe hon U could check
it out sometime
He do a BODIES WRITE
so I can sleep
1 mo nite.

Shush this ain't spostta rym
or be spelled jus write.
Thanks 2 my doctta
Can pick up this pen
see sunsets as they ends.
Yeah, my doctta
He sho do me write.

Someone very tipsie on the phone, told me he thought I was in-luv-with my doctta.
Now that I've thought of it da whipie snapper was write.

Copyright © emystar ... [ 2005-10-05 01:24:22]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: U WRITE, (RIGHT) (User Rating: 1 )
by Elizabeth_Dandy on Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 07:56:30 AM AEST
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Delightful write!
Remember the patients of psychiatrists are supposed to fall in love with the doctor - precondition for a cure.:) :)
Very amusing and hilarious well penned write.
Thanks for sharing
Hugs and smiles
Elizabeth

Re: U WRITE, (RIGHT) (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 03:23:04 PM AEST
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Hehe! Nothing wrong with that Emy...hope he loves ya right back ; )
Nice write, and tell others to mind their own business! Hope your day is better today : )

Scorp.

Re: U WRITE, (RIGHT) (User Rating: 1 )
by lostrelic on Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 05:37:07 PM AEST
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another cool write from a cool person
good job star
r.m.wilder

Re: U WRITE, (RIGHT) (User Rating: 1 )
by Darkhorse71 on Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 06:50:44 PM AEST
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You go, girl!!!!!! Shoot, I wish I could of had a thing with my doctor - she was hot! A very creative write Emy.

hugs and smiles, john

Re: U WRITE, (RIGHT) (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Thursday, 6th October 2005 @ 10:44:24 PM AEST
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Very true and very funny. When it comes to poetry; to each his or her own.

Re: U WRITE, (RIGHT) (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 11:47:27 AM AEST
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LOL I loved this Emy,,thank you for the smile....Eddy

Re: U WRITE, (RIGHT) (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 07:04:16 AM AEST
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How nice of you to write like this ..thanks to Doctta fellow. hugs n luv Emy.:-)venkat

Re: U WRITE, (RIGHT) (User Rating: 1 )
by strider on Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 06:26:44 AM AEST
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Amazing write you just too much to handle.

You deliver with a different style, really loved this one
its so funny.
Well done.

Felix

Re: U WRITE, (RIGHT) (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamPoetess on Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 12:06:29 AM AEST
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This poem is very cute. I liked it. I liked your spelling.
Meagan

Re: U WRITE, (RIGHT) (User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 08:19:26 AM AEST
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this is so different ..wow clever really....thanks for submitting this....
to read this was good for my old brain...
coni

Re: U WRITE, (RIGHT) (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Sunday, 1st January 2006 @ 07:24:42 PM AEST
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Emy, your writes (like these) are hilarious. I'm sorry to laugh, but I think it's pretty good. *S* Cynthia

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