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Array ( [sid] => 107094 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Hollow Feelings [time] => 2005-10-04 19:45:07 [hometext] => This poem was written on the eve of the night I thougth I was losing my love. My pain saturated the paper. [bodytext] => Another thought locked tight inside,
Divulge it not, in yourself confide

So small and delicate a mere child,
Aggreived in demise, subsequent denial

A door blocked, the end of dreams
Affection dies, ripped at seams

Forlorn in vacuity, who to blame?
Insecurity emerges, bury the shame

Rapt in his vigil, farewell to fate,
Impressions of melancholy, minutes too late

Aggressive and irate, wasted time
Heart pessimistic, undeserving swine

Pinch of pity, handful of grief
Uncertainty guilty, he the theif

A plea of mercy, from her bones
saturated in fury, hate he owns

Girl is distorted, new wintry slave
discarded bliss, unrelentless wave

Facade of strength, weakened spirit
Morbid regret, too numb to feel it
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Hollow Feelings

Contributed by Erinlyticia on Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 07:45:07 PM in AEST
Topic: anguished

Another thought locked tight inside,
Divulge it not, in yourself confide

So small and delicate a mere child,
Aggreived in demise, subsequent denial

A door blocked, the end of dreams
Affection dies, ripped at seams

Forlorn in vacuity, who to blame?
Insecurity emerges, bury the shame

Rapt in his vigil, farewell to fate,
Impressions of melancholy, minutes too late

Aggressive and irate, wasted time
Heart pessimistic, undeserving swine

Pinch of pity, handful of grief
Uncertainty guilty, he the theif

A plea of mercy, from her bones
saturated in fury, hate he owns

Girl is distorted, new wintry slave
discarded bliss, unrelentless wave

Facade of strength, weakened spirit
Morbid regret, too numb to feel it

Copyright © Erinlyticia ... [ 2005-10-04 19:45:07]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Hollow Feelings (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 07:49:16 PM AEST
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WoW what an outstanding write. I can feel your pain and anguish through ur words. I hope that all is well with you. An emotional deep write. Well done on presenting such a remarkable piece for us to read.
*hugs*
Sue, ED.

Re: Hollow Feelings (User Rating: 1 )
by candysears on Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 09:44:22 PM AEST
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Very very good....God Bless

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