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And I don’t know what to do
How many times I have wished
For it to be alright
How many times I have wished
For someone to care
I'm near to explosion
So close to tears
These feelings are building
My brain is lashing out
Many people I have hurt
Through these words
No-one will understand
No-one will care
Even if I start to talk
They change it quickly
Two people have heart
Only two people will listen
To these feelings I’m having
These two people
Mean everything to me
But these two people
Are the problems of my pain
I still don’t understand
Why it hurts so much
Why people don’t care
Why can’t anyone listen for a minute?
Why won’t anyone care?

-xXx-

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Close to tears

Contributed by JenJen on Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 04:03:36 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I'm so close to tears
And I don’t know what to do
How many times I have wished
For it to be alright
How many times I have wished
For someone to care
I'm near to explosion
So close to tears
These feelings are building
My brain is lashing out
Many people I have hurt
Through these words
No-one will understand
No-one will care
Even if I start to talk
They change it quickly
Two people have heart
Only two people will listen
To these feelings I’m having
These two people
Mean everything to me
But these two people
Are the problems of my pain
I still don’t understand
Why it hurts so much
Why people don’t care
Why can’t anyone listen for a minute?
Why won’t anyone care?

-xXx-

Copyright Â© JenJen ... [ 2005-10-04 16:03:36]
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Re: Close to tears (User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 04:07:34 PM AEST
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i'm sure i don't stand alone here at ypdc when i say....I care. i'm here if you want to talk...

Re: Close to tears (User Rating: 1 )
by xPixiexDustx on Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 04:09:45 PM AEST
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Awe, so much emotion. I like it, Nicely done. ::Hugs::

Re: Close to tears (User Rating: 1 )
by jheng on Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 04:28:46 PM AEST
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i know that feeling, i'm a loner & there are times that i do feel that i am alone, they say having friends is the solution, but then im not used to opening up to friends ...

Re: Close to tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Bruce on Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 12:04:07 AM AEST
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heartbreaking words.I will surely try to help you in anyway I could, if you so desire.

Re: Close to tears (User Rating: 1 )
by kcampbell on Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 09:15:44 AM AEST
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=hugs= I identify with your feelings nearly exactly. I hope we both find someone who will really be there for us. Don't give up hope!

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