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Array ( [sid] => 107084 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Perfect Now [time] => 2005-10-04 15:56:19 [hometext] => [bodytext] => The twinkle in thine eyes,
Such as comets, paired and streaking,
Raining down Cupid's chaos from the skies
As I stand transfixed, enraptured by thy speaking.

"Yes."..."Yes." thou sayest; o' but what a simple word,
So long in coming, short in going, sweet in sounding.
Occasional bliss, soul crying out, the windows blurred.
Rushing tears and rushing footsteps, hearts pounding.

A soft kiss, a warm embrace.
Heaven on earth, if but for a moment, a perfect now.
Capturing perfection, I burn the image of thy face
Into memory. No thought so happy as this of thou. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 179 [topic] => 2 [informant] => bugoron [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

The Perfect Now

Contributed by bugoron on Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 03:56:19 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

The twinkle in thine eyes,
Such as comets, paired and streaking,
Raining down Cupid's chaos from the skies
As I stand transfixed, enraptured by thy speaking.

"Yes."..."Yes." thou sayest; o' but what a simple word,
So long in coming, short in going, sweet in sounding.
Occasional bliss, soul crying out, the windows blurred.
Rushing tears and rushing footsteps, hearts pounding.

A soft kiss, a warm embrace.
Heaven on earth, if but for a moment, a perfect now.
Capturing perfection, I burn the image of thy face
Into memory. No thought so happy as this of thou.

Copyright © bugoron ... [ 2005-10-04 15:56:19]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The Perfect Now (User Rating: 1 )
by GurlyTye on Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 03:58:22 PM AEST
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a truly moving peace.. sort but so powerfull

Re: The Perfect Now (User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 04:22:12 PM AEST
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thy and thou......havn't read anything written in this way since Shakspeare.....you did it so well too....this was a beautiful write..i love it.. such beautiful words bring to life a beautiful moment...good job....

Re: The Perfect Now (User Rating: 1 )
by xPixiexDustx on Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 04:33:23 PM AEST
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I love this, you expressed it beautifully. Well done! =)

Re: The Perfect Now (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Sunday, 17th February 2008 @ 06:11:37 PM AEST
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I love the old english language. maybe thats why it caught my attention...

i simple loved it, the flow of words works so well..

thanks for sharing.

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