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the passion that we shared.
You touched me and the darkness turned to light.
I can't forget the naked trust,
the truth that was our love.
This quenchless love my dear, it was so right.

And now I cannot satisfy
this thirst that's in my soul.
There's no relief for the fire in my heart.
The only things I know are real
are my love and respect for you,
and all the times our hearts have beat as one.

But now you say it's over,
the twining of our hearts.
You say that we cannot continue on.
Please don't let your fears become
the ruler of your mind.
There's so much more of love yet to be found.

darkhorse71
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Unfinished Love

Contributed by Darkhorse71 on Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 02:13:46 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I know it was no fantasy
the passion that we shared.
You touched me and the darkness turned to light.
I can't forget the naked trust,
the truth that was our love.
This quenchless love my dear, it was so right.

And now I cannot satisfy
this thirst that's in my soul.
There's no relief for the fire in my heart.
The only things I know are real
are my love and respect for you,
and all the times our hearts have beat as one.

But now you say it's over,
the twining of our hearts.
You say that we cannot continue on.
Please don't let your fears become
the ruler of your mind.
There's so much more of love yet to be found.

darkhorse71

Copyright © Darkhorse71 ... [ 2005-10-04 02:13:46]
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Re: Unfinished Love (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 02:36:56 AM AEST
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LOL Can you get out of my head already???

I won't get into resemblances, etc. because I'm beginning to feel like a broken record: )

I very much like your thoughts and feelings expressed in this write,
and very much wish I could transfer this into someone else's heart and mind!!
Anyway, lovely sentiments in this write, and if this is true for you, than all the best.

Scorp.

Re: Unfinished Love (User Rating: 1 )
by brokenwings on Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 03:18:08 AM AEST
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wow you must read minds or hearts. because you said what was on my heart not that long ago. great write

tasha

Re: Unfinished Love (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 04:22:08 AM AEST
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Lead the way bro, I'm ready to learn 'bout luv that is.
I really don't understand how any person could ever turn their backs on your awesome writes.
Good work and happy days.
huggs, big smiles,
emy

Re: Unfinished Love (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 07:35:02 PM AEST
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Why would it be unfinished love? it has to be the beginning, followed by inbetween (thats where the tricky comes in) and then the end...........Right?! Soulful write here. Thanks for Sharing.....

Brew~

Re: Unfinished Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 01:16:48 PM AEST
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Aw john, if its meant to be, it will be. Some people just take more time to realize who there one true love is. And if it doesn't work out keep your head high because theres tonnes of woman out there that are looking for a great guy like you.

- Cassy

Re: Unfinished Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Wednesday, 19th October 2005 @ 05:58:37 PM AEST
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John with each write I read of yours I am getting to really really like ur work.
If it's meant to be, it'll happen and if it doesn't there are a lot of girls out there who would like to have such a wonderful guy like u in their life. Much luck to u sweet guy.
*hugs*
Sue

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