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Array ( [sid] => 107039 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Breakup [time] => 2005-10-03 21:31:47 [hometext] => Note: this is not from personal experience FYI [bodytext] => I leave messages on your machine,
Written countless unanswerred letters,
Memories of our great love flood my mind,
Must this love die after so long?

Dead roses lie in a vase I gave you,
Torn up pictures that miror my torn heart,
Words said of hatred and sorrow,
Oh, how I regret that dreadful night.

I call you in hope of hearing your voice,
you answer and i can hear your breath,
I try to tell you I love you and want to be with you,
There is silence and then the line goes dead.

I receive a letter with excitement and tear it open,
But I read it with sadness in my heart,
You tell me that what we had was not meant to be
I fall to the floor with only my tears to comfort me.

Your tears seal this envelope that contains a dagger in my heart,
my tears blot out the words of this dreadful letter.
You say I must continue on without you in my life,
Now your words mean as much to me as the dirt i walk upon. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 254 [topic] => 22 [informant] => carlton [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

The Breakup

Contributed by carlton on Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 09:31:47 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I leave messages on your machine,
Written countless unanswerred letters,
Memories of our great love flood my mind,
Must this love die after so long?

Dead roses lie in a vase I gave you,
Torn up pictures that miror my torn heart,
Words said of hatred and sorrow,
Oh, how I regret that dreadful night.

I call you in hope of hearing your voice,
you answer and i can hear your breath,
I try to tell you I love you and want to be with you,
There is silence and then the line goes dead.

I receive a letter with excitement and tear it open,
But I read it with sadness in my heart,
You tell me that what we had was not meant to be
I fall to the floor with only my tears to comfort me.

Your tears seal this envelope that contains a dagger in my heart,
my tears blot out the words of this dreadful letter.
You say I must continue on without you in my life,
Now your words mean as much to me as the dirt i walk upon.

Copyright © carlton ... [ 2005-10-03 21:31:47]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The Breakup (User Rating: 1 )
by sick_n_twisted on Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 10:47:40 PM AEST
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nice poem...i love how u wrote this....its deep and really emotional im going threw the same thing...

Re: The Breakup (User Rating: 1 )
by New_York_Chick on Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 12:14:23 PM AEST
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this is a great work, especialy since you didn't even write from personal experience

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