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Array ( [sid] => 107008 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Feel [time] => 2005-10-03 16:52:42 [hometext] => [bodytext] => kaleidoscope sensations filter down my spine
A pool of water diluted by reality
Ignore the reflection
Lies come to the surface as truth is found deeper still

Do we question why the hair stands on end
Staring into emptiness we find that glimmer
That hint of something
The nameless, the faded, the forgotten
Eclectic singularity
Emblazoned cold pushing through my mind

What is it that ties us to this world
The consciousness we claim as real
Could we be memories, closed eye hallucinations
Distant thoughts given hollow shells
Or do we desperately pray
Hopelessly cling
To convictions of a greater reality
Lesser creations of finer plans

I will confide
In thoughts I do hide
Escape this dismal blur of feelings
And lies
It helps me to know that secrets still do hide
And perhaps it was a life I must be denied [comments] => 3 [counter] => 164 [topic] => 73 [informant] => Maxximus [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => abstract )

Feel

Contributed by Maxximus on Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 04:52:42 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract

kaleidoscope sensations filter down my spine
A pool of water diluted by reality
Ignore the reflection
Lies come to the surface as truth is found deeper still

Do we question why the hair stands on end
Staring into emptiness we find that glimmer
That hint of something
The nameless, the faded, the forgotten
Eclectic singularity
Emblazoned cold pushing through my mind

What is it that ties us to this world
The consciousness we claim as real
Could we be memories, closed eye hallucinations
Distant thoughts given hollow shells
Or do we desperately pray
Hopelessly cling
To convictions of a greater reality
Lesser creations of finer plans

I will confide
In thoughts I do hide
Escape this dismal blur of feelings
And lies
It helps me to know that secrets still do hide
And perhaps it was a life I must be denied

Copyright © Maxximus ... [ 2005-10-03 16:52:42]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Feel (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 05:22:26 PM AEST
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very deep and descriptive. christopher.

Re: Feel (User Rating: 1 )
by poisonpen00ad on Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 05:48:57 PM AEST
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Woah this is a great and brilliant write. This one is now one of my faves. Great work.

C.

Re: Feel (User Rating: 1 )
by Shade on Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 11:04:42 PM AEST
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Spectacular write! Definite 5 from me.

-Changing Man

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