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Open up the door and let my love shine through
Don’t close the door please let me love you
You’ve broken my heart not once but twice
Who was the fool who said love was nice

It’s a whole lot of heartbreak and much more pain
And it ain’t even worth the gain
Love sticks u like a blunt sword striking your heart
It hurts it hurts and u suddenly don’t feel anymore

I love you so why do you torment me so
My judgment is gone and my heart has gone blur
Love sucks but I’m still caught up in it
She’s playing my heart as she sees fit

She can stab me she can cheat and I’ll still come running back
Let’s just say love’s on the attack
And I’m a victim well I’m tired of running back to you
You’re not my angel or my honey and our love isn’t true

I’m not love’s soldier anymore
And I finally found the cure
To a broken heart and it didn’t take me long
It’s to forget about you and just move on
By Kerwin Etienne
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love sucks

Contributed by cutestmofo on Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 01:38:24 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

OPEN THE DOOR
Open up the door and let my love shine through
Don’t close the door please let me love you
You’ve broken my heart not once but twice
Who was the fool who said love was nice

It’s a whole lot of heartbreak and much more pain
And it ain’t even worth the gain
Love sticks u like a blunt sword striking your heart
It hurts it hurts and u suddenly don’t feel anymore

I love you so why do you torment me so
My judgment is gone and my heart has gone blur
Love sucks but I’m still caught up in it
She’s playing my heart as she sees fit

She can stab me she can cheat and I’ll still come running back
Let’s just say love’s on the attack
And I’m a victim well I’m tired of running back to you
You’re not my angel or my honey and our love isn’t true

I’m not love’s soldier anymore
And I finally found the cure
To a broken heart and it didn’t take me long
It’s to forget about you and just move on
By Kerwin Etienne

Copyright Â© cutestmofo ... [ 2005-10-02 13:38:24]
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Re: love sucks (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 01:43:21 PM AEST
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Hey cutestmofo,
Very powerfull determind write.
U go now.
huggs,
emy

Re: love sucks (User Rating: 1 )
by JenJen on Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 01:44:12 PM AEST
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such a sweet but sad poem keep it up
luv
jenni
xxx

Re: love sucks (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 01:49:12 PM AEST
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Good for you, and yes, it does suck!!!! Good expression. Hang in there, and keep up the writes.

Scorp.

Re: love sucks (User Rating: 1 )
by anangel_1593 on Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 02:23:13 PM AEST
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I feel like i'm actually there, watching you tell her to get a life! Nice job. keep up the great work,

Re: love sucks (User Rating: 1 )
by lostrelic on Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 03:36:06 PM AEST
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i like the flow of this poem cool way to write it meaning isnt hard to see
r.m.wilder

Re: love sucks (User Rating: 1 )
by brokenwings on Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 12:45:19 AM AEST
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good write

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