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Array ( [sid] => 106929 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Captive Audience Prophet [time] => 2005-10-02 12:58:00 [hometext] => Being Tortured Overloaded with peoples problems [bodytext] => I watch the seasons
change and old pain slowly fades
I'm a stranger In danger
of overloading
as lost souls tell me what they are all about.
When did I become the prohet
the one who knows everything
firewalls are blocking
so I have trouble remembering
why I am trembling
In fear and doubt.

The people gather and someone's laughing
as I slip and fall down
no one's is listening
no one cares
they warm themselfs on the embers
of my emotions as they burn...
I'm a captive of anothers rant
pretending that I am Interested
visibly I shiver and shake
yet still they flow on,
ohhhhh
I'm afraid there's been a fatal error
this transmission is terminated
I see thier lips moving
but I hear no more words.

I ain't no angel and I have no halo
still they come at me
looking at me to preach
about some non exsistence prophecy,
In confusion
they reason
I should make thier choice
as they are not really conversating
they are only talking to hear thier own voice.

stop talking to me
I don't care what they say
don't wanna know what they're thinking,
there is no prophecy
I'm in hell myself
lookin for a reason for being.
.

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Captive Audience Prophet

Contributed by secretwind on Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 12:58:00 PM in AEST
Topic: anguished

I watch the seasons
change and old pain slowly fades
I'm a stranger In danger
of overloading
as lost souls tell me what they are all about.
When did I become the prohet
the one who knows everything
firewalls are blocking
so I have trouble remembering
why I am trembling
In fear and doubt.

The people gather and someone's laughing
as I slip and fall down
no one's is listening
no one cares
they warm themselfs on the embers
of my emotions as they burn...
I'm a captive of anothers rant
pretending that I am Interested
visibly I shiver and shake
yet still they flow on,
ohhhhh
I'm afraid there's been a fatal error
this transmission is terminated
I see thier lips moving
but I hear no more words.

I ain't no angel and I have no halo
still they come at me
looking at me to preach
about some non exsistence prophecy,
In confusion
they reason
I should make thier choice
as they are not really conversating
they are only talking to hear thier own voice.

stop talking to me
I don't care what they say
don't wanna know what they're thinking,
there is no prophecy
I'm in hell myself
lookin for a reason for being.
.

Copyright © secretwind ... [ 2005-10-02 12:58:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Captive Audience Prophet (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 01:28:48 PM AEST
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Real depth of emotion to your words in this write. Great job, and I like the comparisions. Another awesome poem from you---keep it up!

Scorp.

Re: Captive Audience Prophet (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 01:38:34 PM AEST
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Way deeper than deep.
An awesome write!
huggs,
emy

Re: Captive Audience Prophet (User Rating: 1 )
by anangel_1593 on Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 02:27:14 PM AEST
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This is my first time reading a poem of yours, but i can guarantee it won't be the last! Congratulations on a top-notch write!
Ciao,

Re: Captive Audience Prophet (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 03:55:38 PM AEST
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A very interesting poem, good write.

Re: Captive Audience Prophet (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 08:37:13 PM AEST
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From an emotional standpoint this is a good write. I can relate to this on a personal level. (but for other reasons I think it is good for me to look at helping others)

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